...Huntress is so impressed by the transformation she asks to become a real demoness, a succubus maybe?

by Redjack440
Storyline The magic zipper
Previous Chapter Barbara decides to turn Selina into a fellow creature of the night.

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"Mistress..."  Huntress wasn't sure why she called Batgirl that; she wasn't sure if she was saying it out of respect or from smoldering desire that seemed to be welling up within.  However, another part of her was quite certain that it felt right.

Batgirl turned to look at the woman, tilting her head to one side as her eyes flashed an emerald green for a moment as she studied Helena's body.  "Is there something on your mind, Helena?" she asked as she slowly walked up to Huntress, stopping when her face was only inches away, her eyes locking her Huntress' own.

What do you really want, Helena?

Huntress felt her body shudder in pleasure as Batgirl's unspoken question echoed through her mind.  She couldn't break away from the former heroine's gaze and found herself becoming lost in those green eyes.

"I want..." Huntress gasped in pleasure as she felt her breasts being massaged, her nipples hardening rapidly.

"Yes?" the former Barbara Gordon asked as her fingernails extended to claws and she ripped way the top of Huntress' already revealing costume.  She teasingly let one claw lightly circle a nipple, getting another gasp of pleasure from the woman.  "As you were saying, Helena..."

"Mistress...I...wish to.." she was cut off as Batgirl's fingers touched her lips.

"You really mean that when you call me that, don't you?" Batgirl asked.  She didn't really need an answer since she saw the truth from looking into Helena's mind.

"Yes," Helena gasped as pleasure rippled through her body from admitting the truth.  "And I wish for you to-"

Batgirl suddenly lunged forward, her movement a blur before Helena suddenly found herself up against a wall and eagerly returning the deep kiss she was receiving.

I know what you want, Helena...

There was no mistaking it this time, Batgirl's voice was inside her mind.

And I am more than willing to give it to you...

Batgirl broke the kiss and then smiled.  "But first...do you swear yourself to me..."

In an act of complete surrender, Huntress willingly tilted her head to the side, offering her neck to her mistress.

The former Barbara Gordon smiled again.  She could smell the blood pulsing just under the skin of Helena's neck.  Huntress' surrender was true and complete (apparently Helena had a secret thing for Barbara Gordon before she was changed by The Zipper; the change merely brought those lusty thoughts to the surface).  As she bit down and drank Helena's blood, causing the woman to gasp again in pleasure, she found herself trying to make a decision...

Note:  Sorry for the lame chapter, folks...been really tired from work.

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
zarir_77 - 11/19/2015 5:35 AM

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