Ariel and Gluttony

by Megumi
Storyline Disney Princess Corruption
Previous Chapter The Corruption Begins

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Ariel was practicing her singing when flounder rushed towards her like a fish possessed.  

“Ariel! Ariel, c’mon you’ve got to try it.”

“Try what?”

“The food.  We just found the tastiest food.  It came from the surface, and there weren’t even any hooks stuck in it.”

“Is it strawberries.  I had a strawberry once and I just loved it.”

“Not strawberries,” said flounder, “Uh... think meat.”

“Meat!”  Ariel paused.  “Flounder, you know I don’t eat anything that can break into song.”

“C’mon, just a taste.  It’s already dead, no use letting it spoil.”

As they were getting close, flounder told Ariel to close her eyes.


“Just do it.  Please.”

She did.  The fish somehow placed a taste in her mouth.

As soon as it touched her tongue she was changed.  Endorphins fired in her brain.  The meat itself didn’t do much for her, but it was raw and bloody and the blood filled her with warmth.  The fish could have the meat, but she wanted more blood.  Every inch of her was energized.  Then something happened that never happened before.  She felt her teeth sharpen.  Ariel was the product of millions of years of mermaid evolution.  Instincts and predatory habits that she didn’t even know she had, that her kin had denied for generations, began to awaken.  

“Flounder, this is great.  This is wonderful.  Do you have more.”

“I knew you’d understand once you tried it.  We only have a little left, but with your help I’m sure we can get more.  I’ve heard legends.  You can sing to ships.  Men will be tempted, so tempted they’ll jump right into the sea.  Then we’ll grab them.”

“Flounder what are you talking about.”

“Oh yeah.  I guess you should open your eyes now.”

Ariel opened her eyes, then gasped in shock.

He had a weighted ball tied to his leg.  He was dressed in a naval uniform.  Ariel had heard of this pirates making men... what did they call it?  Walk a plank.  He was picked over to the white of his bone but there was no mistaking it.  Ariel had tasted human blood, and, like a vampire, she would never stop wanting more.

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
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