Richards, Susan

by Nighthawk
Storyline Prison for Meta-Powered Women
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Prison
Previous Chapter Green, Doreen

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"Richards, Susan!" 

"Here, ma'am," The former Invisible Woman muttered quietly. 

Susan 'Sue' Storm Richards had been one of the lucky ones away from New York when the Watchtower space station slammed into the city.  Unfortunately, the rest of her family hadn't been as fortunate.  The sight of her husband's, brother's, and son's charred and mangled bodies in the morgue had driven her into the depths of despair and destroyed her sanity.  Overcome with grief, she secluded herself for months, during which time her sadness turned to anger at the unexplainable event that had taken her family from her.  Unable to cope, she wanted someone to pay and she directed her rage at the people of the other universe.  She deluded herself into even believing they were somehow responsible for what happened.  And so, she began to target and murder as many people from the other reality as she could.  She used her invisibility powers to plant bombs at refugee centers, killing hundreds of people. 

Eventually, SHIELD managed to track her down.  Surrounded and with no way out, she'd been prepared to kill herself with one last bomb, but was stopped by Ben Grimm, the only other survivor of the Fantastic Four.  Ben's pleas managed to pierce through the madness and grief that had gripped her and Sue surrendered herself. 

Like the others, she wore an orange jumpsuit and was restrained in the shackles and power-dampening collar that were standard for transporting metahuman criminals. 

The warden couldn't help feeling sympathetic at the sight of her disheveled and in chains.  God knows she suffered a lot.  Still, the people she'd killed had suffered too and didn't deserve to die.  Moving on, she continued down the line.

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Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in

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