Title

Richards, Susan

by Nighthawk
Storyline Prison for Meta-Powered Women
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Prison
Previous Chapter Green, Doreen

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"Richards, Susan!" 

"Here, ma'am," The former Invisible Woman muttered quietly. 

Susan 'Sue' Storm Richards had been one of the lucky ones away from New York when the Watchtower space station slammed into the city.  Unfortunately, the rest of her family hadn't been as fortunate.  The sight of her husband's, brother's, and son's charred and mangled bodies in the morgue had driven her into the depths of despair and destroyed her sanity.  Overcome with grief, she secluded herself for months, during which time her sadness turned to anger at the unexplainable event that had taken her family from her.  Unable to cope, she wanted someone to pay and she directed her rage at the people of the other universe.  She deluded herself into even believing they were somehow responsible for what happened.  And so, she began to target and murder as many people from the other reality as she could.  She used her invisibility powers to plant bombs at refugee centers, killing hundreds of people. 

Eventually, SHIELD managed to track her down.  Surrounded and with no way out, she'd been prepared to kill herself with one last bomb, but was stopped by Ben Grimm, the only other survivor of the Fantastic Four.  Ben's pleas managed to pierce through the madness and grief that had gripped her and Sue surrendered herself. 

Like the others, she wore an orange jumpsuit and was restrained in the shackles and power-dampening collar that were standard for transporting metahuman criminals. 

The warden couldn't help feeling sympathetic at the sight of her disheveled and in chains.  God knows she suffered a lot.  Still, the people she'd killed had suffered too and didn't deserve to die.  Moving on, she continued down the line.


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heisonso1234 - 4/26/2017 7:51 AM
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Yang Xiao Long - 4/25/2017 10:18 PM
Sorry it's so short. I had a much longer chapter, but the site crashed or something making me lose it. This is all I could remember typing up on the third time trying to rewrite it.
Yang Xiao Long - 4/25/2017 5:31 PM
Will post a Pink Lantern chapter tonight, and will be posting a Harem App chapter on Saturday
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JimmyKasche - 4/24/2017 11:52 PM
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Yang Xiao Long - 4/24/2017 11:42 PM
Yeah. I'll have it up tomorrow, been a bit busy
JimmyKasche - 4/24/2017 8:53 PM
Hey Yang Xiao Long, are you still working on a Pink Lanterns chapter?
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