Title

Richards, Susan

by Nighthawk
Storyline Prison for Meta-Powered Women
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Prison
Previous Chapter Green, Doreen

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"Richards, Susan!" 

"Here, ma'am," The former Invisible Woman muttered quietly. 

Susan 'Sue' Storm Richards had been one of the lucky ones away from New York when the Watchtower space station slammed into the city.  Unfortunately, the rest of her family hadn't been as fortunate.  The sight of her husband's, brother's, and son's charred and mangled bodies in the morgue had driven her into the depths of despair and destroyed her sanity.  Overcome with grief, she secluded herself for months, during which time her sadness turned to anger at the unexplainable event that had taken her family from her.  Unable to cope, she wanted someone to pay and she directed her rage at the people of the other universe.  She deluded herself into even believing they were somehow responsible for what happened.  And so, she began to target and murder as many people from the other reality as she could.  She used her invisibility powers to plant bombs at refugee centers, killing hundreds of people. 

Eventually, SHIELD managed to track her down.  Surrounded and with no way out, she'd been prepared to kill herself with one last bomb, but was stopped by Ben Grimm, the only other survivor of the Fantastic Four.  Ben's pleas managed to pierce through the madness and grief that had gripped her and Sue surrendered herself. 

Like the others, she wore an orange jumpsuit and was restrained in the shackles and power-dampening collar that were standard for transporting metahuman criminals. 

The warden couldn't help feeling sympathetic at the sight of her disheveled and in chains.  God knows she suffered a lot.  Still, the people she'd killed had suffered too and didn't deserve to die.  Moving on, she continued down the line.


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gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 10:05 PM
ES, look for a doctor in the fish
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 10:00 PM
GAV, I loved the chapter. I did like the Diana/Lois interaction. Still can't believe I did that. What is going to happen in the ceremony? Want to continue this in the message board?
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:34 PM
I am wondering if the same people are posting twisted Disney Princess stories here http://www.pinterest.com/pin/552746554236351206/
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:31 PM
@ ES, I did incorporate it, I hope you like where I took the rest of the cast throw the morning.
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 9:16 PM
gothamalleyviper, I messed up on my Lois Human Sacrifice chapter in Rubber Queen. It should have come after your Human Sacrifice chapter. Can't believe I did that.
colleem - 12/18/2014 11:25 AM
Susan´s dream is online. I will try to write Tony´s dream until Saturday. If someone want to write with CC and me in this Story just tell it :) We are talking about Email for better planing
gothamalleyviper - 12/17/2014 8:42 PM
I am about half way throw the chapter for Rubberqueen, and plotted out the "Wedding Chapter", but I keep getting interupted by my life AFK. I kind of want the Warhamer can from 63 Joker and go play "Whack-a-Joe"
colleem - 12/17/2014 2:14 PM
Oprimus... dont you think that it is a bit... unfair to post empty chapters?
ESchorcho - 12/17/2014 7:34 AM
gothamalleyviper, do you need any help with Rubber Queen? Let me know. If you want to start a discussion in the Message Board I would be willing to talk.
gothamalleyviper - 12/14/2014 4:39 PM
Posted 63rd Joker, working on Rubber Queen



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