Title

Richards, Susan

by Nighthawk
Storyline Prison for Meta-Powered Women
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Prison
Previous Chapter Green, Doreen

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"Richards, Susan!" 

"Here, ma'am," The former Invisible Woman muttered quietly. 

Susan 'Sue' Storm Richards had been one of the lucky ones away from New York when the Watchtower space station slammed into the city.  Unfortunately, the rest of her family hadn't been as fortunate.  The sight of her husband's, brother's, and son's charred and mangled bodies in the morgue had driven her into the depths of despair and destroyed her sanity.  Overcome with grief, she secluded herself for months, during which time her sadness turned to anger at the unexplainable event that had taken her family from her.  Unable to cope, she wanted someone to pay and she directed her rage at the people of the other universe.  She deluded herself into even believing they were somehow responsible for what happened.  And so, she began to target and murder as many people from the other reality as she could.  She used her invisibility powers to plant bombs at refugee centers, killing hundreds of people. 

Eventually, SHIELD managed to track her down.  Surrounded and with no way out, she'd been prepared to kill herself with one last bomb, but was stopped by Ben Grimm, the only other survivor of the Fantastic Four.  Ben's pleas managed to pierce through the madness and grief that had gripped her and Sue surrendered herself. 

Like the others, she wore an orange jumpsuit and was restrained in the shackles and power-dampening collar that were standard for transporting metahuman criminals. 

The warden couldn't help feeling sympathetic at the sight of her disheveled and in chains.  God knows she suffered a lot.  Still, the people she'd killed had suffered too and didn't deserve to die.  Moving on, she continued down the line.


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gothamalleyviper - 8/30/2014 11:30 PM
Another Rubber Queen chapter, please let me know what people think
SpiralEdge - 8/30/2014 10:38 PM
Good night to everyone!!
C.King - 8/30/2014 10:50 AM
I did write a storyline for rewriting comics, TV shows and... movies. So if you want to rewrite Spider-man 2...
Dark Z - 8/30/2014 9:15 AM
After watching that damn DVD, I believe that Gwen Stacey deserves a happier, sexier, fetishy-future than cannon.
C.King - 8/29/2014 9:35 PM
Posted some Bianca ideas so i can brainstorm and remember in Message Board.
C.King - 8/29/2014 9:12 PM
Give me a few days, RL might get hectic.
gothamalleyviper - 8/29/2014 9:11 PM
OK, what about another Mistress Bianca chapter?
C.King - 8/29/2014 8:38 PM
GAV... Sometimes I have no idea to do with a episode. No Matter good. Because it's ideas are outside my own. Catwoman episode is like that. For now.
C.King - 8/29/2014 7:39 PM
Ideas spawned from Power Sharing Storyline. Some/Many/All DC and/or Marvel Characters are Benders, have Omnitrixes or are Timelord versions of themselves. Thoughts?
gothamalleyviper - 8/29/2014 2:51 PM
So I am going to do another Rubber Queen chapter, what other threads do people want me to add to?



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