Title

A portal opens up in the world of Ben Tennyson...

by C.King
Storyline The Superstories Adventures of Ben 10
Characters Ben "Ben 10" Tennyson
Category Television
Previous Chapter Ben 10 Begins

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 Ben looked at the pinwheel aura whirlpool which was hovering just in front of the Store 22 of Mr. Smoothy. He stood with Driba and Blukic as they looked at it also. The duo of the world's stupidest geniuses had been working on the machine which Hokestar had used to make his Mr. Smoothy store exist in multiple dimensions at once.

 "You blew a hole in the universe right here at Mr. Smoothy. How could you blow a hole in the universe? Why did you blow a hole in the universe anyway?" asked Ben as he was here to secure the whirlpool in case trouble came to it or through it.

 "We were experimenting in a defense system to protect our dimension from invading dolphins. Obviously," said Driba as he continues, "We even had a device to record the connecting universe and even switch it if need be. Not sure why it's here and not in plumber's headquarters."

 "I told you the spacial displace was not hooked up right." said Blukic as he looked at his partner.

 "Did not!" replied the other Galvin.

 "Did too!"

 "Did not!"

 "Quit it you two. We have a bigger problem right now. Like the huge swirling hole in the universe. Okay it's stable. Not going to explode or implode or something?" asked Ben as he tried to figure things out.

 "It's too stable actually. It can't be close right now. Going to need special parts to get that done, I reckin." said Blukic, as he moved to the tool he pulled out of his belt.

 Ben turned to the Galvins and glared. As they waited, something started to come out of the portal.


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gothamalleyviper - 2/27/2015 6:45 AM
Random Idea: Lesbian Perfume. Center female character gets dunked and then while she stays straight every woman in close proximity has an instant need to have lesbian sex with her. Thoughts?
misbegotten2 - 2/24/2015 2:37 PM
Eschorcho, it's cool, I'll probably have a new chapter up tomorrow or Thursday.
ESchorcho - 2/24/2015 9:29 AM
misbegotten2, I don't know how much time I will have to write for the Fuckdoll Finishing School so if you want to take the next chapter please do. That goes for anyone else as well.
misbegotten2 - 2/19/2015 10:29 AM
Eschorcho, that was a great addition. Give me a few days and I'll have something up.
ESchorcho - 2/16/2015 6:13 PM
misbegotten2, I'm working on a new chapter and should be able to post tomorrow.
misbegotten2 - 2/15/2015 2:50 PM
ESchoro-thank you for the compliment. I'll have a new chapter later tonight.
ESchorcho - 2/15/2015 8:08 AM
misbegotten2, that was one genius chapter in The Fuckdoll Finishing School. Please keep posting!
colleem - 2/10/2015 4:58 PM
Cool Story jazze. Keep it up
CorruptionCentral - 2/1/2015 5:18 PM
C. King... Sure I would. I would love to see one of the classically monogamous heroes chased by a real world party girl like Lindsay Lohan too ;-)
C.King - 2/1/2015 1:00 PM
Like Katy Perry or Kate Upton dating this or that hero...



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