Title

A portal opens up in the world of Ben Tennyson...

by C.King
Storyline The Superstories Adventures of Ben 10
Characters Ben "Ben 10" Tennyson
Category Television
Previous Chapter Ben 10 Begins

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 Ben looked at the pinwheel aura whirlpool which was hovering just in front of the Store 22 of Mr. Smoothy. He stood with Driba and Blukic as they looked at it also. The duo of the world's stupidest geniuses had been working on the machine which Hokestar had used to make his Mr. Smoothy store exist in multiple dimensions at once.

 "You blew a hole in the universe right here at Mr. Smoothy. How could you blow a hole in the universe? Why did you blow a hole in the universe anyway?" asked Ben as he was here to secure the whirlpool in case trouble came to it or through it.

 "We were experimenting in a defense system to protect our dimension from invading dolphins. Obviously," said Driba as he continues, "We even had a device to record the connecting universe and even switch it if need be. Not sure why it's here and not in plumber's headquarters."

 "I told you the spacial displace was not hooked up right." said Blukic as he looked at his partner.

 "Did not!" replied the other Galvin.

 "Did too!"

 "Did not!"

 "Quit it you two. We have a bigger problem right now. Like the huge swirling hole in the universe. Okay it's stable. Not going to explode or implode or something?" asked Ben as he tried to figure things out.

 "It's too stable actually. It can't be close right now. Going to need special parts to get that done, I reckin." said Blukic, as he moved to the tool he pulled out of his belt.

 Ben turned to the Galvins and glared. As they waited, something started to come out of the portal.


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colleem - 1/15/2018 2:37 PM
Yang. Not a great fan of sailer moon but I read your story and enjoyed it. I always like stories with a well written background
ESchorcho - 1/15/2018 8:10 AM
Sorry Gorel. I'll try to write a chapter today or tomorrow.
Yang Xiao Long - 1/15/2018 3:41 AM
What do you guys think of the Sailor Moon story I added? I would love some feedback and help with it.
Drake G. Reaper - 1/14/2018 9:06 PM
Thanks for that C.King I've posted another chapter to Dropping By.
C.King - 1/14/2018 1:51 PM
Not sure when I can update DB:SW again, unless inspired. But hope it gives you inspiration and determination, Drake.
Gorel - 1/14/2018 1:30 PM
Hey Eschorcho, if you need more time I could do a side story, or a post that won't effect yours.
Drake G. Reaper - 1/13/2018 11:04 PM
On a side note Jimmy Hucow has been updated.
Drake G. Reaper - 1/13/2018 11:02 PM
Okay maybe that wasn't well thought out. The test is more or less if Baroness can go through with her plan and how committed she is to her goal.
C.King - 1/13/2018 7:40 PM
Drake, the plan seems to have more then one part for the options. Does the test only begin and end with the rescue to begin with?
gothamalleyviper - 1/13/2018 5:52 PM
Sorry Drake I am not feeling the SW at the moment, if I get an inspiration I might toss out a chapter, C.K I hope you like the chapter and the openings it leaves for Gotham.



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