Title

It goes so wrong

by LadyX
Storyline She Venom
Characters Mary Jane Watson Mary Jane Spider-Man
Category Corruption Spiderman
Previous Chapter Mary Jane and the ambush

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Peter stopped his crying as Mary jane rubbed his shoulders.

"It's okay Peter." MJ said.

"No, it isn't. I hate to say it, but there's a part of me that's glad he's dead, that the symbiote is finally destroyed." Peter admitted.

MJ could feel the rage from the symbiote boiling up inside of her. "Peter, you don't mean that." 

"I do MJ. How many people have been hurt by Eddie Brock and that thing? No, it had to be done." Peter said.

MJ was now fighting an internal battle with the symbiote. It wanted to attack Peter, to make him pay.

Then a loud beep sounded in the room. "Avengers signal, I've got to go." Pete said, before pulling on his mask and jumping out the window.

And just like that, Mary Jane once again felt discarded, feeling like she was second fiddle to Peter's one true love, Spider-Man. The symbiote fed on her pain, her suffering.

He does not appreciate you...

"It's not that." Mary Jane said. 

It is... He controls you... Keeps you at a distance... 

'He just tries to protect me." MJ protested.

You are your own woman... How many times has he made you do things you did not want to do... Give up things you enjoyed...

A flood of memories flew through MJ's mind. Peter talking her out of acting and modeling. Peter telling her what to do all the time. Peter making her quit smoking.

The symbiote found its opening, and Mary Jane didn't put up a fight. The symbiote invaded every part of her body. The clothing the symbiote had become at her request now shifted into the full black Venom suit. It fit like a glove, hugging all of MJ's curves. It continued, covering her face, with the familiar look of Venom, teeth and tongue. There was an opening at the top however that let her fiery red hair flow freely.

"This feels...good. We feel good." Mary Jane/She-Venom said.

 


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noname002j - 2/19/2017 3:54 PM
No luck. I tried that multiple times and keep getting an error message when I resubmit. It says there no room on the disk. I'll keep trying, but if it doesn't work in a couple days, I'll just have try reposting it again.
CorruptionCentral - 2/19/2017 2:56 PM
noname002j: You can fix your title. Click on the storyline for Miss Muscle (Left panel). From there you can edit chapter and add a title.
e1993 - 2/19/2017 1:11 PM

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colleem - 2/19/2017 2:33 AM
Aye. Have the same Problems as you have Solar. When my Story reach a specific length it is over :(
noname002j - 2/18/2017 10:27 PM
Nope, your not I'm having similar issues updating the Miss Muscle chapter I wrote, having screwed up the title link.
extreme1 - 2/18/2017 10:25 PM
SolarSearcher, The most characters from any of my recent chapters was a Gambit the Pimp chapter that had 13,000 words and that posted fine. That being said, I think Colleem was having similar problems.
Solarsearcher - 2/18/2017 9:22 PM
No, my issue is a server error that doesn't let me post a chapter of 25,000 characters, nor does it allow me to update any chapters I post. Am I alone in this regard?
gothamalleyviper - 2/18/2017 3:08 PM
If I do start a round the calander Holiday love slave story do we want to see Dipuc done as read?
ESchorcho - 2/18/2017 2:03 PM
I have a lot of success using Google Chrome.



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