Title

It goes so wrong

by LadyX
Storyline She Venom
Characters Mary Jane Watson Mary Jane Spider-Man
Category Corruption Spiderman
Previous Chapter Mary Jane and the ambush

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Peter stopped his crying as Mary jane rubbed his shoulders.

"It's okay Peter." MJ said.

"No, it isn't. I hate to say it, but there's a part of me that's glad he's dead, that the symbiote is finally destroyed." Peter admitted.

MJ could feel the rage from the symbiote boiling up inside of her. "Peter, you don't mean that." 

"I do MJ. How many people have been hurt by Eddie Brock and that thing? No, it had to be done." Peter said.

MJ was now fighting an internal battle with the symbiote. It wanted to attack Peter, to make him pay.

Then a loud beep sounded in the room. "Avengers signal, I've got to go." Pete said, before pulling on his mask and jumping out the window.

And just like that, Mary Jane once again felt discarded, feeling like she was second fiddle to Peter's one true love, Spider-Man. The symbiote fed on her pain, her suffering.

He does not appreciate you...

"It's not that." Mary Jane said. 

It is... He controls you... Keeps you at a distance... 

'He just tries to protect me." MJ protested.

You are your own woman... How many times has he made you do things you did not want to do... Give up things you enjoyed...

A flood of memories flew through MJ's mind. Peter talking her out of acting and modeling. Peter telling her what to do all the time. Peter making her quit smoking.

The symbiote found its opening, and Mary Jane didn't put up a fight. The symbiote invaded every part of her body. The clothing the symbiote had become at her request now shifted into the full black Venom suit. It fit like a glove, hugging all of MJ's curves. It continued, covering her face, with the familiar look of Venom, teeth and tongue. There was an opening at the top however that let her fiery red hair flow freely.

"This feels...good. We feel good." Mary Jane/She-Venom said.

 


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Gorel - 8/23/2017 4:17 PM
Hey sidewinder89, got some questions in the message board for ya.
gothamalleyviper - 8/23/2017 12:44 PM
Posted some more crank on the message boards, interested if anyone has feed back or edit suggestions.
gothamalleyviper - 8/20/2017 9:54 PM
So had a thought, What if Robin 2 (Jason Todd) was Jennifer Todd but was still a Robin and not a Batgirl?
Gorel - 8/20/2017 2:49 PM
Stumbo, if you want to add to Going Native you are more than welcome. :)
ESchorcho - 8/19/2017 10:56 AM
GAV, I loved your chapters. The storyline has a lot of potential. As for ruleradvent's addition, I'm confused. Don't get me wrong, it was well written but it doesn't seem to flow from the other chapters. Am I missing something?
gothamalleyviper - 8/18/2017 1:52 PM
Any feed back is welcome.
Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)



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