It goes so wrong

by LadyX
Storyline She Venom
Characters Mary Jane Watson Mary Jane Spider-Man
Category Corruption Spiderman
Previous Chapter Mary Jane and the ambush

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Peter stopped his crying as Mary jane rubbed his shoulders.

"It's okay Peter." MJ said.

"No, it isn't. I hate to say it, but there's a part of me that's glad he's dead, that the symbiote is finally destroyed." Peter admitted.

MJ could feel the rage from the symbiote boiling up inside of her. "Peter, you don't mean that." 

"I do MJ. How many people have been hurt by Eddie Brock and that thing? No, it had to be done." Peter said.

MJ was now fighting an internal battle with the symbiote. It wanted to attack Peter, to make him pay.

Then a loud beep sounded in the room. "Avengers signal, I've got to go." Pete said, before pulling on his mask and jumping out the window.

And just like that, Mary Jane once again felt discarded, feeling like she was second fiddle to Peter's one true love, Spider-Man. The symbiote fed on her pain, her suffering.

He does not appreciate you...

"It's not that." Mary Jane said. 

It is... He controls you... Keeps you at a distance... 

'He just tries to protect me." MJ protested.

You are your own woman... How many times has he made you do things you did not want to do... Give up things you enjoyed...

A flood of memories flew through MJ's mind. Peter talking her out of acting and modeling. Peter telling her what to do all the time. Peter making her quit smoking.

The symbiote found its opening, and Mary Jane didn't put up a fight. The symbiote invaded every part of her body. The clothing the symbiote had become at her request now shifted into the full black Venom suit. It fit like a glove, hugging all of MJ's curves. It continued, covering her face, with the familiar look of Venom, teeth and tongue. There was an opening at the top however that let her fiery red hair flow freely.

"This feels...good. We feel good." Mary Jane/She-Venom said.


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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
zarir_77 - 11/19/2015 5:35 AM

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