Malice contacts an old friend

by mercury01
Storyline A Thug's Wish
Characters Jean Gray Invisible Woman
Category Mind Control Female Dom Transformation Corruption
Previous Chapter Goddess Ororo summons Kitty and Jean - her best friends

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"Kitty? Jean? Could you come, please?"

Jean grunted in response and glanced in the mirror. Ever since she woke up like this, she'd felt something odd. Like things were not the way they should be. But they had to be. She was still Jean Grey of the X-Men...

And she needed to get dressed. She lumbered over to her dresser and looked at her clothes. Normally she'd have picked out a nice dress, but she felt that a dress didn't feel right. It was too... girly. She tossed away a drawerful of clothes, grunting in frustration, before she found a pair of jeans...

No, they weren't jeans, they were overalls. A nice heavy pair of overalls, just her size. They fit just right on her frame, and always had, ever since she worked at the trainyard... That's why she was so muscular under her fat. She paused in refelction.

They had nicknames for her back then. "Mean Jean" was the most popular with the guys, but that was only because she preferred girls... 

She didn't realize that she was indeed being affected by Blob's wish. Unfortunately for her, her only experience with the obese was Blob himself! And just like when she was under the influence of Mastermind, reality was reshaping itself to her new outlook. Only it was permanent, rather than a mere illusion.

Yeah, Jean liked girls. She was a regular at the local lesbian bars. She fished a cigarette out of her overalls as she dressed and lit up, puffing it like a pro. She coughed as her voice turned gravelly from years of smoking.

"Mmmmm, dat's better," she grunted as she sucked down the cigarette and lit another. She buttoned on a flannel shirt and did up her overalls. A pair of steel-toed boots completed the ensemble and she looked into the mirror.

She looked fine. A plain, jowly face, with a pugged, crooked nose (she'd broken it once or twice), hard, flinty eyes beneath a heavy brow and buzz-cut hair. She was still "Mean" Jean Dukes, sister to that no-good criminal Fred Dukes, a.k.a. The Blob. At least Jean was able to hold down a job and clean up her act by joining this "X-Men" gang. Not like that lazy sponge. 

"Better go see what's up 'roro's black ass." She lumbered out of her room.


Madame Fantastic sighed in contentment as Herbie wriggled between her legs and watched Lyja paw at Johnny. The thick, sexy skrull was practically purring with lust. Johnny made a show of resisting, but they all knew he couldn't get enough of her in any shape. The brawny shapeshifter grew a quartet of tentacles to restrain her husband while she aggressively frenched him.

A plan percolated in Malice's mind. She'd done all this with just a few tweaks to her own thought processes... and now she was probably the richest woman on the planet! She could have a legion of lesbian lovers and super-slaves if she wished, just by nudging a superheroine's self-image in the right direction. She'd seen what had happened at Avengers Mansion. Ms. Marvel was a lazy couch potato, Photon was a black housekeeper right out of the 1950s, the Wasp was a doting housewife and Tigra was a pampered Persian.

This called for an experiment. Malice snapped her fingers. "Herbie, get me my communicator. I'm going to call..."

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gothamalleyviper - 11/30/2015 10:25 AM
CC, the fix I found was to go back in Internet Explorer and re-do the breaks.
CorruptionCentral - 11/30/2015 8:57 AM
Had the same issue GAV noted posting in Chrome. Tried MS Edge too with same result. Finally copied text into Work and changed font to Times New Roman. That worked, kinda
gothamalleyviper - 11/29/2015 3:10 PM
Using Firefox to upload chapters is deleting line breaks
Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.

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