Title

Susan walks in to find a massive She Hulk trying to seduce her husband.

by Gorel
Storyline Slobby Heroines
Characters She-Hulk Invisible Woman Mister Fantastic Mr. Mxyzptlk
Category Marvel Growth Body Modification Mind Control
Previous Chapter She makes it to the Baxtor building and is greeted by a shocked Reed Richards.

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"Reed honey? I heard some screaming are you o.... K?" Staring with her mouth open in shock Susan Storm stood completely still gawking at the scene before her. There pinned against the wall and trying his hardest to escape was her husband being cuddled by her friend Jennifer Walters, now a towering obese giantess. She had to guess that she was now 20 feet tall and more than half that as wide with hips wider than her own shoulders and a pair of breasts so large that Reed was pinned under them, her gut was the size of a small car as she pressed it against the wall keeping Mr. Fantastic where he was.

"What the hell is going on here?!"

"Oh hi Suzy!" Chirped Jen as she turned to see what the noise was about. "Are you hungry? I'm just starving, and little Reed here won't give me a kiss." Pouted the massive she-Bulk as she pulled Reed's head into her cleavage, causing the man to flail and muffle out cries of help to his wife.

"Put him down Jen, your suffocating him!" Huffing with her lips pouted out she dropped Reed to the floor and sat down on the ground with a heavy thud, her hands rubbing her stomach to calm her growing appetite while Susan helped up her husband. "What did you do to her Reed? Is this a sick joke?"

"Cough, cough, cough... I wish it was Suzy, she came to me like this, I don't know whats going on but this is WAY outside my field of expertise." Looking back at Jen as she started looking at one of Reed's tools like it were a hotdog to nibble on Susan turned back to Reed. "Well if your not responsible than what made her like this?"

Suddenly the entire room began to flicker with light just before a small poof of green smoke popped above their heads, when the smoke cleared everyone was confused at what had appeared.

"Ta da!" Floating up in the air was a small 2 foot tall man wearing a purple bowler hat and yellow cloths, a cigar in his mouth as he chuckled and giggled while he flew circles around the room. "Ask and ya get yer wish sweety."

"Who... Or what are you?"

Standing straight in mid-air and bowing with his hat in his hand the strange creature introduced himself. "The name's Mr Myxlplyx my dear, 5th dimensional trouble maker extraordinaire." Lowering himself to the ground he skipped and danced his way up to the couple as he looked at She Hulk and laughed. "I came here to stir up some fun and what fun it was to turn this green power-babe into a total whale ha ha."

"What did you do to Jen you little monster!"

"Imp! I'm an Imp toots and don't forget it." Holding back his angry wife Reed tried to calm her down as Myx explained himself. "It's a game really, every time she gets hungry she'll eat until she gets full, but when she's full she'll get bigger and fatter and start the whole thing up again."

"What if she doesn't eat then?" Asked Reed hoping for a glimmer of a chance to slow the damage.

"Thats gonna be pretty hard since I made it so that if she tried to resist she'd start getting a little... Anxious if you know what I mean."

Gauking in shock that this 'imp' had such powers they looked over to Jen to find her still gnawing on one of Reed's tools only now she was licking its length why rubbing her belly and breasts, moaning as if she were aroused. "But she'll get enourmous! Stop this now!!!"

"Oooh now your a fiesty one, I see why you married her." Laughed the imp as he suddenly appeared at Reed's side and nudged his shoulder with his elbow. "Ok."

"Ok? You mean you will?"

Sure... If you can make me say my name backwards. Do that and she'll shrink right back to her old self, but screw up aaaaaaand... You'll be in the same boat as her ha ha ha!"

Looking back at their friend in her current state and to each other they nodded with agreement as the imp Myxlplyx dabbed his cigar, waiting for an answer.


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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