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Lois hung up the phone after telling Clark where to meet her at "There, my mistresses. He should be arriving soon." Lois said.
"Very good." Fire said. "Now how about, getting ready for his arrival."
"Hmmmm, I just got an idea!" Ice said. "How about we call OUR boyfriends as well, they would make great slaves too."
"That sounds like a good idea!"
"I can't wait to have Guy fuck me!" Ice said.
"I would love to enslave my boyfriend, Booster Gold." Fire cooed.
"Ah, damn it!" Harley Quinn said. "Ever since everyone brokes out a Arkham, I haven't been able to find Mr. J anywhere."
While escaping Joker had told her, that he was heading to Metropolis. Harley got on her motercycle and got to Metropolis, then remembered something.
"Ah shit! Mr. J didn't tells me where in Metropolis he was going!" she said to herself angry. "Looks like i'll just haves to look around. But, I have time!" She said laughing to herself. "Bats is to busy trying to find where in Gothem all us escapees are hiding,
but HA, jokes on him, me and Mr. J are no were NEAR Gotham!"
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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