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She brings them to her...

by C.King
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Category Television Ring of Truth
Previous Chapter ...about Grayza (sorry, picked wrong selection).

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Mele-On knew the hunt was on, her mind also reminded her she didn't have to go hunting so far a field for her prey. She could have him right under her, by the power of the ring.

She typed on her computer file,

Aeryn Sun was not promoted to Commandant, but instead to Commander. She is currently asigned to Commandant Mele-on Grayza's Command Carrier. John Crichton and his son has followed her to her new home.

Things changed and she knew Sun was currently serving her, even if the two of them didn't like and even hated each other. John was similar and the two of them with their son stayed as far from their Commandant as they could. Which would make her goals much harder then it would be.

'I could make it much easier by erasing their memories of me and all my actions against the crew of the Moya. The again I could just make John want me instantly. I would choose the former before the latter though. A hard victory is better then an easy victory, which itself is better then a defeat of any kind.'

She moved to a closet, one of a couple which were perks of her command. In this closet, instead of clothes were the chemicals she could use to effect her Heppel Oil. Checmicals in wines, food additives, incense, bath oils and more. Label with special codes added to them so she could always know their effects.

'So what am I going to do first?'


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noname002j - 2/19/2017 3:54 PM
No luck. I tried that multiple times and keep getting an error message when I resubmit. It says there no room on the disk. I'll keep trying, but if it doesn't work in a couple days, I'll just have try reposting it again.
CorruptionCentral - 2/19/2017 2:56 PM
noname002j: You can fix your title. Click on the storyline for Miss Muscle (Left panel). From there you can edit chapter and add a title.
e1993 - 2/19/2017 1:11 PM

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colleem - 2/19/2017 2:33 AM
Aye. Have the same Problems as you have Solar. When my Story reach a specific length it is over :(
noname002j - 2/18/2017 10:27 PM
Nope, your not I'm having similar issues updating the Miss Muscle chapter I wrote, having screwed up the title link.
extreme1 - 2/18/2017 10:25 PM
SolarSearcher, The most characters from any of my recent chapters was a Gambit the Pimp chapter that had 13,000 words and that posted fine. That being said, I think Colleem was having similar problems.
Solarsearcher - 2/18/2017 9:22 PM
No, my issue is a server error that doesn't let me post a chapter of 25,000 characters, nor does it allow me to update any chapters I post. Am I alone in this regard?
gothamalleyviper - 2/18/2017 3:08 PM
If I do start a round the calander Holiday love slave story do we want to see Dipuc done as read?
ESchorcho - 2/18/2017 2:03 PM
I have a lot of success using Google Chrome.



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