She brings them to her...

by C.King
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Category Television Ring of Truth
Previous Chapter ...about Grayza (sorry, picked wrong selection).

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Mele-On knew the hunt was on, her mind also reminded her she didn't have to go hunting so far a field for her prey. She could have him right under her, by the power of the ring.

She typed on her computer file,

Aeryn Sun was not promoted to Commandant, but instead to Commander. She is currently asigned to Commandant Mele-on Grayza's Command Carrier. John Crichton and his son has followed her to her new home.

Things changed and she knew Sun was currently serving her, even if the two of them didn't like and even hated each other. John was similar and the two of them with their son stayed as far from their Commandant as they could. Which would make her goals much harder then it would be.

'I could make it much easier by erasing their memories of me and all my actions against the crew of the Moya. The again I could just make John want me instantly. I would choose the former before the latter though. A hard victory is better then an easy victory, which itself is better then a defeat of any kind.'

She moved to a closet, one of a couple which were perks of her command. In this closet, instead of clothes were the chemicals she could use to effect her Heppel Oil. Checmicals in wines, food additives, incense, bath oils and more. Label with special codes added to them so she could always know their effects.

'So what am I going to do first?'

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
zarir_77 - 11/19/2015 5:35 AM

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