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She brings them to her...

by C.King
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Category Television Ring of Truth
Previous Chapter ...about Grayza (sorry, picked wrong selection).

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Mele-On knew the hunt was on, her mind also reminded her she didn't have to go hunting so far a field for her prey. She could have him right under her, by the power of the ring.

She typed on her computer file,

Aeryn Sun was not promoted to Commandant, but instead to Commander. She is currently asigned to Commandant Mele-on Grayza's Command Carrier. John Crichton and his son has followed her to her new home.

Things changed and she knew Sun was currently serving her, even if the two of them didn't like and even hated each other. John was similar and the two of them with their son stayed as far from their Commandant as they could. Which would make her goals much harder then it would be.

'I could make it much easier by erasing their memories of me and all my actions against the crew of the Moya. The again I could just make John want me instantly. I would choose the former before the latter though. A hard victory is better then an easy victory, which itself is better then a defeat of any kind.'

She moved to a closet, one of a couple which were perks of her command. In this closet, instead of clothes were the chemicals she could use to effect her Heppel Oil. Checmicals in wines, food additives, incense, bath oils and more. Label with special codes added to them so she could always know their effects.

'So what am I going to do first?'


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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