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She brings them to her...

by C.King
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Category Television Ring of Truth
Previous Chapter ...about Grayza (sorry, picked wrong selection).

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Mele-On knew the hunt was on, her mind also reminded her she didn't have to go hunting so far a field for her prey. She could have him right under her, by the power of the ring.

She typed on her computer file,

Aeryn Sun was not promoted to Commandant, but instead to Commander. She is currently asigned to Commandant Mele-on Grayza's Command Carrier. John Crichton and his son has followed her to her new home.

Things changed and she knew Sun was currently serving her, even if the two of them didn't like and even hated each other. John was similar and the two of them with their son stayed as far from their Commandant as they could. Which would make her goals much harder then it would be.

'I could make it much easier by erasing their memories of me and all my actions against the crew of the Moya. The again I could just make John want me instantly. I would choose the former before the latter though. A hard victory is better then an easy victory, which itself is better then a defeat of any kind.'

She moved to a closet, one of a couple which were perks of her command. In this closet, instead of clothes were the chemicals she could use to effect her Heppel Oil. Checmicals in wines, food additives, incense, bath oils and more. Label with special codes added to them so she could always know their effects.

'So what am I going to do first?'


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C.King - 4/24/2014 9:54 AM
Good Job, Kirayoshi. Good Job. I'll see if I have a story to continue it.
gothamalleyviper - 4/23/2014 7:41 PM
One short, one longer, but hope people provide feed back
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 6:50 PM
Was somebody going to pick up from Asp's new chapter? I was about to start when I noticed a new option. If someone wants to take it go ahead I will wait till tomorrow.
aspiringactor - 4/22/2014 4:12 PM
Just added a chapter for 'Return of the Black Queen' if any one wants to take a look.
Gorel - 4/22/2014 11:36 AM
No worries
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 5:08 AM
Gorel, I will have something up for the Blue Flu this evening, just had stuff to do the last few days.
venkman - 4/21/2014 1:14 AM
Thanks guys!Glad you liked it. Not sure where to take it now but would be good to see it continue, either by me or someone else :)
ESchorcho - 4/20/2014 9:49 PM
I second that on Fausta's revenge. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Loving the Valkyrie transformation.
dunloprobert - 4/20/2014 9:23 AM
venkman, just to say i have thoroughly enjoyed your fausta's revenge story, and i am glad no one else has tried to add/interfere with it. thankyou.
Fanfic Fetishist - 4/18/2014 10:06 PM
I hope everyone's been enjoying my Ben 10 story so far.



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