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Alfred Pennyworth investigates why his little maid is taking so long to show the man in

by loreilei7
Storyline Changed World
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The sexy little maid batman had become blinked in shock. The man at the door was the Penguin but in a more dressed down fashion. Before she could say a word, a voice rang out in stern dissaproval.

"Bebe, show our guest inside and stop dawdling about." Alfred Pennyworth came forward, looking less like an elderly butler and more like a dissipated old playboy. "I beg your pardon, the girl's pretty but she hasn't a mind in her."
"quite alright, I was enjoying merely looking at her"More like leering, Batman thought as the penguin kissed her dainty hand
"Bebe,run along and fetch us some drinks." she began to walk away stumbling a bit in her unfamilarly high heels as she felt Alfred swat her hard on her round butt. The two men chortled heartily


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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