Title

Time Traveler

by sleeve.jones
Storyline Wedding of the century
Characters Doctor Doom Invisible Woman
Category
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   Doom sat on his throne resting his head on his hand watching a crystal ball.  The alarms started ringing.  Doom bots from all over the complex rushed into the room.  Doom stood up and prepared an energy blast.  A ball of energy appeared in the center of the throne room.  Dom recognized the types of energy being displayed his sensors.  The ball of light was a time traveler.  The light melted away revealing a beautiful young woman in a green uniform reminiscent of the Fantastic Four except it had the Latvia crest where the four should have been.  The girl was probably 20 or so.

     "Hello Father."  The girl said.

      "Who are you." He said.

      "I am Valeria Von Doom, your daughter with the invisible woman."  She smiled and bowed.

      He was already preparing a scan.  The girl placed her hands at her side letting the machine scan her without resistence.

   "Satisfied father.  I'm sure the cronoton meter also prooved I am from the future." She said.

    "Why did you come here.  Is there some future you wish to prevent."  Doom said. 

    "No father."  She bowed her head, "in order for my brother's and I to exist I must make sure the future happens."

     Doom sat back in his chair.  He smiled under his helmet as he considered what she had just told him.  This girl came back in time wearing his crest and she claims to be his and Susan Storm's child.  This could not be a trick for what purpose could it serve.

     "If you are here to make sure your future happens then tell me what future could you come from."

    "Father in my future the enemy tried to take this world but the children of Doom defeated the threat and you have assumed control of the world."

     "Who is this enemy."

 

 


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Hey Gorel. New Idea in the message Board. Tell me what you think
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Gorel - 11/19/2017 7:43 PM
New post, tell me whatcha think.
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Did an alternate path for Oracle in Hucow tell me what you think?
colleem - 11/16/2017 10:09 AM
Jtreat. Great chapter. Very good. Would like to read more
Gorel - 11/14/2017 3:13 PM
Hmm, you have point Colleem. Does anyone else have an interest in TF/Breeding/Consumption stories?
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@Stench of a queen I saw that you like different types of females like I do, do you have a mail or something were we can chat about this stuff more? Or a way to talk more frequent ?
colleem - 11/11/2017 3:49 PM
Gorel. Question in the Message Board
Gorel - 11/11/2017 2:19 PM
Thanks ESchorcho, if you want to add to it or any of my other stories go right ahead. I LOVE reactionary writing!



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