Title

Time Traveler

by sleeve.jones
Storyline Wedding of the century
Characters Doctor Doom Invisible Woman
Category
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   Doom sat on his throne resting his head on his hand watching a crystal ball.  The alarms started ringing.  Doom bots from all over the complex rushed into the room.  Doom stood up and prepared an energy blast.  A ball of energy appeared in the center of the throne room.  Dom recognized the types of energy being displayed his sensors.  The ball of light was a time traveler.  The light melted away revealing a beautiful young woman in a green uniform reminiscent of the Fantastic Four except it had the Latvia crest where the four should have been.  The girl was probably 20 or so.

     "Hello Father."  The girl said.

      "Who are you." He said.

      "I am Valeria Von Doom, your daughter with the invisible woman."  She smiled and bowed.

      He was already preparing a scan.  The girl placed her hands at her side letting the machine scan her without resistence.

   "Satisfied father.  I'm sure the cronoton meter also prooved I am from the future." She said.

    "Why did you come here.  Is there some future you wish to prevent."  Doom said. 

    "No father."  She bowed her head, "in order for my brother's and I to exist I must make sure the future happens."

     Doom sat back in his chair.  He smiled under his helmet as he considered what she had just told him.  This girl came back in time wearing his crest and she claims to be his and Susan Storm's child.  This could not be a trick for what purpose could it serve.

     "If you are here to make sure your future happens then tell me what future could you come from."

    "Father in my future the enemy tried to take this world but the children of Doom defeated the threat and you have assumed control of the world."

     "Who is this enemy."

 

 


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Evva - 7/27/2017 10:27 PM
ruleradvent - TAG! (many chapters were updated. And I am opening a topic to discuss about our stories)
colleem - 7/27/2017 11:26 AM
@danknoodle. Nice Master PC version. The first Symbiont story i like because the it is not so brutal. it shows the mind from Venom nicely.
Danknoodle420 - 7/27/2017 10:55 AM
Also I feel like we need more Symbiote story. I'm taking suggestion for Symbiote stories and idea.
Danknoodle420 - 7/27/2017 10:43 AM
Thanks, I kinda figured before you said so but still. Who knew all you need to do it update it.
Cal512 - 7/27/2017 7:55 AM
Try editing the chapter after you submit them. That usually works for me.
Danknoodle420 - 7/27/2017 12:54 AM
This is getting really annoying, I made sure that I had a space between each line and it all stuck together. ??
Gorel - 7/26/2017 4:19 PM
Would love feedback if any.
Danknoodle420 - 7/25/2017 11:24 PM
I got a feeling that I had burned myself out. I literally wrote a story and gave up after that. ??
Evva - 7/25/2017 8:02 AM
Danknoodle420 - try readcomiconline.to It works for every browser, but mini browsers
gothamalleyviper - 7/24/2017 4:23 PM
WW Van Bar is from a story with nothing to do with Werewolves, he is a character for a modern pirate story. I just wanted the worst name possible to make the guy jaded an a fighter.



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