by mercury01
Storyline Vampiric Worlds
Characters Betty Cooper
Category Archie Corruption Transformation
Previous Chapter A New Succubus is Born

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This was the last straw.

It was Hallowe'en night and Betty Cooper sat on her couch, sniffling, drinking a bottle of wine. Archie had left her in the cold... again! She and him had agreed to go as Barbara Eden and Larry Hagman from "I Dream of Jeannie" to the party, but he'd been late to pick her up. She'd paced around in her pink harem girl outfit , trying to get him on the phone. When he finally answered, she heard a female voice beside him and music in the background.

"Wait, who's that with you, Archie?"

"(tell her it's the TV!)" "Uh, sorry Betts, my jalopy broke down and I uh, had to get it towed, so I'm stuck at home watching--"

She slammed the phone down. Now, half-drunk, still wearing her costume, she stood and stumbled across the living room to the kitchen. On the way there, she bumped into the bookcase, and a book slid out of the top shelf, landing open on the floor.

"Huh?" she picked it up. "Magic and witchcraft?" she snickered. She knew her parents were odd, but in never occured to her that her mother had a witchy phase. Just for fun, she thumbed through it until she spotted a ritual.

"How to summon a demon...?"


Betty knelt on the basement floor before a circle of salt, holding a rat she'd found in one of the humane mousetraps.

"Asmodeus, Carnal Lord, Prince of Desire, with this sacrifice, grant me a boon!" She brought the cleaver down on the squirming rat. The basement suddenly went dark and a tall horned figure appeared in the circle of salt, wreathed in shadow.

"I am summoned," The demon spoke. "Speak, mortal!"

She poured out her story, how Archie was always brushing her off to be with Veronica and how she tried her best to be his perfect girl but he'd never notice. She finished by telling the story of tonight, her voice quavering with heartache.

The creature smiled almost kindly. "I can't make Archie love you," he said sympathetically. "But I can give you the power to, if that is what you wish."

Betty nodded. "Oh... okay," she said with a sniffle. "How?"

"It's simple: You will be transformed into a succubus, a creature of desire," the demon explained. "You'll have the power to make any man or woman want you."

"W-wait, do I have to sell you my soul or something for this?" Betty asked hesitantly.

The demon shook its head. "No, of course not! I am willing to give you this power for ninety-nine hours. Surely enough time to  convince your paramour." What the demon didn't tell Betty was that being a succubus for so long would blacken her soul with corruptive influence. No one could resist the lure of such power. After ninety-nine hours, she'd willingly offer up her soul to stay a succubus forever!

Betty did some mental calculation. "That's like... four days, right? I can do four days."

"Good," the demon nodded and produced a bony quill and a parchment. "A drop of blood and the pact is sealed." Betty took the quill and pricked her thumb. The red droplet plopped on the parchment with a hiss.

"It is done," the demon said. He didn't bother to warn Betty of the side effects. After all, that was part of the fun.

"Betty held her head and gasped as she felt the transformation begin...

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ESchorcho - 11/30/2015 6:57 PM
gothamalleyviper, I'm working on a new Rubber Queen chapter. Look for it in the next few days.
gothamalleyviper - 11/30/2015 10:25 AM
CC, the fix I found was to go back in Internet Explorer and re-do the breaks.
CorruptionCentral - 11/30/2015 8:57 AM
Had the same issue GAV noted posting in Chrome. Tried MS Edge too with same result. Finally copied text into Work and changed font to Times New Roman. That worked, kinda
gothamalleyviper - 11/29/2015 3:10 PM
Using Firefox to upload chapters is deleting line breaks
Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.

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