Title

She falls into the trap

by hyperion
Storyline The rebirth of Malice
Characters Human Torch Absolutely Everyone Fantastic Four Thing Invisible Woman Mister Fantastic
Category Absolutely Everything
Previous Chapter Psycho-man beings his plan

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Susan Storm-Richards approached the light at the end of the sewage tunnel. She could feel the Psycho-man's presence grow inside her. It made her shudder. She had renewed determination as she stepped into the light. Shaking her head to release the confusion.

 

To her dismay, even though she knew she'd find him here, the sick visage of the organe-skinned villain made Susan seethe with anger. She balled a fist. She readied for battle. One bubble in his head would end him for good. She began to raise her hand, still doing this act, even though it was actually pointless. "I FUCKING HATE YOU!" She cried out.

 

Pyscho-man merely smiled, "I know you do, and I will use that hate that grows inside of you." He hit the desire button hard, and ramped up the knob.

 

Susan cried out, "OH GOD!" As she felt her womanhood alomst gush, causing her legs to go weak, and she fell to the floor, unable to resist the feeling. It drove her wild. She writhed on the floor.

 

"You and I are connected Susan Richards, in a way you were never connected to anyone, not even your husband." He spoked to her moving towards her. As he did, he hit another button, a new one. It was labelled "acceptance", and it followed many other new buttons. He picked her up off the floor. "We have much to do in the microverse, there is an uprising I need your help with". He began punching in coordinates to return to his homeworld with Sue.

 

Susan felt....defeated, even though her powers remained. She just stood with this vile villain as he tapped his control box. All she could do was lean against his large form. "What of my team?" It was all she could think to ask, as waves of light surrounded them and they began to shrink.

 

Psycho-man cackled, "Some old friends will remain to deal with Reed and your team." He put his hand on her waist as they shrank. "For now, focus on the future at hand. I have much to show you."

 

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Reed was dealing with the gargoyles while Ben Grimm and Johnny Storm fought of dragons. Though they were all manifestations of fear, that the city itself concocted, they were doing real damage.

 

Above the city, on a high building three beings cackled. They were dressed in purple hoods and tight fitting clothes. Their maker was already back home, and now it was their world to wreak havoc upon. The first hooded figure lifted her hood to reveal a raven haired beauty. They were all Hate-monger androids created by Psycho-man, and there were more. These were designed specifically for the other three members of the Fantastic Four, while Pyshco-man dealt with Susan. These three were for the Fantastic Four's remaining members. The others were for other teams. Each designed to seduce a specific hero or heroine.

 

The other two members pulled off their hoods. The first, a brunette with bronze skin, and the last a green-skinned woman with pink hair.

 

The leader, Raven, spoke first. "Sisters, its time to make the Fantastic Four bow before us!" With a flick of a switch on her android wrist, the nightmares across the city stopped. The girls now were going to meet the men of the Fantastic Four, and seduce each one.

 

 


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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