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by Megumi
Storyline The Doctors Wife
Characters Spider-Man
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*********Warning this contains spoilers to Amazing 700***************


Doctor Octopus had stolen Spider-mans body.  Peter had one hope of reclaiming his life.  It was a fleeting hope, but hope none the less.  It required that Octavius's ruined body hold onto life for a few minutes more, but more importantly it required that the evil doctor, the master planner, not be prepared for the very same trick he himself had devised.

Peter had reprogrammed the golden octobot, the very one Doc Ock had used to steal his body.  Just now, it was lunging towards Octavius's neck.

Octavius sneered.  A carbonadium plate protected his mind from the octobots intrusion.

He grabbed the device and tossed it aside with triumphant fury.

Like when he had broken the Scorpions jaw (and possibly his neck)  Octavius had forgotten his own strength.  The mind switching device flew much further than the bad doctor had intended.

Mary Jane rushed in the direction everyone else rushed away from.  Something deep in her heart told her that Peter was in grave danger.  Suddenly she caught a golden glint of something fly towards her at tremendous speed.  She was struck by the octobot.  

"No!  Peter screamed.  He tried desperately to resist as his mind was pulled from the dying body that formerly belonged to doctor Octavius and transferred into the nimble form of MJ.

The last thing he heard was Octavius's horrid laugh coming from what was supposed to be his own mouth.


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JimmyKasche - 7/21/2017 2:39 AM
I've been a bit busy in real life... which is why my chapters kinda stalled... when I finally got time to write... I got sick and my brain doesn't wanna focus :P
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:56 PM
Actually let me know if there's another story you want me to add or continue... Got so many ;)
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:54 PM
Well I'll try to post She-Hulk; Going Native some time this weekend. Unless anyone else would like to.
colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
Danknoodle420 - 7/18/2017 10:52 PM
Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
extreme1 - 7/17/2017 11:50 AM
The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.



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