Restarting older stories

by colleem - 9/21/2017 5:34 AM

Planing to restatrt  one of many older stories
 Toys of purple man
Master plan Marvel
Or 
Revenge of purple man
Is anyone interested


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 9/23/2017 9:09 AM

well I'm always a fan of the Purple Man :P


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 9/24/2017 1:57 AM

so you have to chose ^^

The last chapter from Toys of purple man
http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=8438
the last chapter from Revenge of Purple 
http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=94120


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 9/24/2017 4:40 PM

hmm I think I like the setup of Toys where he's playing Psychiatrist better :)


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 9/25/2017 8:03 AM

More or last the last question ??

A total restart or following the start with him and Susan 
And if you want a restart. Which favorite woman do you want to see. Marvel or dc
Give me the top five please. No Susan storm. Already wrote her??


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 9/25/2017 5:44 PM

I would think total restart... it might get more people interested that way instead of having to jump in midway after however long it has been.

Hmm.. Don't have a combined list... so here's two top fives :P 
Marvel
Emma Frost 
Carol Danvers
Wasp
Black Widow
Scarlet Witch
DC:
Barbara Gordon/Batgirl
Power Girl
Black Canary
Harley Quinn
Wonder Woman


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 9/29/2017 11:13 PM

Did I scare you off with my 10 instead of 5 >_> 

:P


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 9/30/2017 3:44 AM

Not really :)But as you maybe noticed i like bigger Chapters with background^^ 

Just finished my first Chapter that explains why DC and Marvel are both united in one World.
For now i havePower Girl as the Secretary from Violett
The First Chapter is more or less only a intro and has nothing to do with the main story :)


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 9/30/2017 3:16 PM

Well I was joking.

Nice chapter like the setup and Power Girl works for me as the new secretary. 


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 10/4/2017 7:19 PM

I'm kinda formulating an idea of Kilgrave breaking out of SHIELD custody and planning for 5 years but I don't entirely have a full idea fleshed out... 

if you got something in mind Coleem feel free to continue from where you left off :P 


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 10/5/2017 4:50 AM

be my guest :) would like to hear your ideas :))My Idea was like this

Killgrave (dc) merged with killgrave (marvel) but because he had no power in DC universe it was a new born Killgrave. He lost his skin colour and (not fully worked out) lost his Power temporary. After he had learned how he could use them again he made contact with  lower SHIELD Ranks and made sure that the "Dr. Violet" Physiology Center got a security clearance :))
but that is only a rush idea


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 10/5/2017 7:04 PM

Kinda fits my idea.

I was thinking Purple Man  was in a specially created SHIELD  cell but  due to the merging of DC and Marvel the cell or building fails... and he goes off the grid making his list of people for vengeance, while again building the credentials as Dr. Violet. 


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 10/6/2017 8:00 AM

Sounds good to me. Will be in vacation for a few days so have fun writing it :)


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 10/7/2017 4:07 AM

very nice chapter Jimmy :)

I will ignore Anz. Chapter because i always do so do not be concerned. i just don´t like his way to rush a chapter and the small chapters. but this is my problem.
I will maybe be able to write something before i go into vacation. it will mostly inform about how Power Girl got his Secretary, how he build up his Job and so minor things. 
My idea for a Victim wasNatasha Romanov
Pepper Pots 
Wonder Woman
But i have no idea who would be the Male Part. Exept for Pepper i have no idea who they are dating.
The white queen would be a tough test because she would simply scan his mind and that would be over with it :)Any ideas for the male counter parts? after all he is a "marriage" counsellor


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 10/7/2017 2:15 PM

Wonder Woman is usually dating Steve Trevor.

Black Widow... uh she's dated a ton of people in the comics.... so that's a bit harder.
I mean I guess he could just be a couples therapist or just have him be a regular psychiatrist that occasionally takes on couples too. 


RE: Restarting older stories

by CorruptionCentral - 10/7/2017 10:21 PM

Actually, in the matter of Wonder Woman and dating, it depends strongly on which continuity you are talking about as in the ret-conned versions over the last 25 years, she has had intimate relationships with Superman (before he and Lois got together), Batman, Aquaman (very short lived), and a gaggle of mortals. It isn't that she slept around, it was that most modern writers have difficulty understanding how anyone can be normal without a relationship. 

I would try to tackle this one of two ways. One way is to put this in a world where all the relationships happened and in relatively short order as she has been on the job less than 10 years. The second, and my preferred choice, would be she sees the doctor at the request of heroine friends that are worried that the Amazon has a serious relationship avoidance issue. She would simply be there to get the doctor to say there isn't an issue because she knows she has good reason not to get distracted by relationships that can not be continued when she goes home. What she would get from the doctor would be FAR more entertaining for her and your readers, LOL.


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 10/7/2017 10:39 PM

that might actually work for Black Widow too... she's dated like Everyone from Hercules to Daredevil :P


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 10/8/2017 10:19 PM

Won't be able to make any other chapter in the next week. Barcelona I am coming ??


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 10/17/2017 3:09 PM

You back and working on the next chapter yet? :P


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 10/18/2017 12:09 PM

Wuhu^^ feels good being missed :)Finally back home but not really started to write right now


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 10/21/2017 5:27 PM

I am sorry for the short Chapter. Was just not kissed by inspiration i fear


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 10/22/2017 1:30 PM

No worries. I didn't think it was short... then again my chapters aren't usually terribly long either...


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 10/24/2017 2:43 PM

Start writing the next one. Right now around 8 Pages, so my normal length :)It will intruduce the following Members.

Black Widow
Pepper Pots
but the Main actors for this time arePeter Parker and MJ Watson who have marriage Problems because of Black Cat.
Should be up maybe on Thursday


RE: Restarting older stories

by C.King - 10/26/2017 8:50 AM

  1.  Emailed this to colleem but reposted her as well:
  2.  I was thinking of Pete and MJ going to Kilgraves. Assuming someone or myself doesn't write it, I was curious what you thought of the idea of Purple Man sleeping with MJ, as expected. But programming Peter to be sexually submissive to supervillainesses, then selling the data to them. Why? One to make money, but also playing into the 'toys' element. I could see Killgraves wanting to seduce normal or superheroine women above supervillainesses, just to enjoy the corruption element of making the morally stuck up women break down below him. Peter could be the same, but rather then break Peter himself, Killgraves could do the same by having him violate his morals with bad girls.
    Just a thought. Thanks.
    HVulpes


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 10/26/2017 11:55 AM

I'm fine with the idea of him making Peter weak to Supervillanesses...

on the other hand I also kinda like the idea that Kilgrave using his powers on Supervillainesses too... as I don't imagine he'd care... 
Especially as there are some like Felicia that aren't quite villains most of the time :P
I did also have a barely formed idea of Mary Jane getting angry at Peter and forcing him to dress up as a woman ... but I don't have the how or why ... and really that could go for any couple too >_> 


RE: Restarting older stories

by C.King - 10/26/2017 12:52 PM

 I see Kilgraves as enjoying his power and dominance against people. So making a bad girl do bad things might be fun, it's not as fun as breaking non-bad girls and lording over them. Which might be why he was obsessed with Jessica Jones. Everything, even sex, is about power to him. Like how in the Avengers: EMH cartoon, after Tony humiliated him he wanted to break Tony by making Iron Man his slave/whipping boy.


RE: Restarting older stories

by JimmyKasche - 10/26/2017 1:20 PM

well I wasn't specifically thinking them doing bad things necessarily.

Just the overall power of making them do what HE wanted them to... even if it might have been something they would have done anyway :P 


RE: Restarting older stories

by C.King - 10/26/2017 1:24 PM

 Read the tropes page, the comment deep down he wants to be loved unconditionally. However his actions point to a dominating psychopath. He broke Jessica in the comics, not by raping her. But by bring women home, raping them while she watched, while Killgraves forced Jessica to wish for her to be raped by him. So perverting and corrupting good women would come before bad, imo. But he might have fun using villainesses to corrupt/pervert heroes. Like forcing Captain America to be Viper's sex toy or something. Thoughts?


RE: Restarting older stories

by colleem - 10/26/2017 1:58 PM

nice chapter C.King. Only thing i wanted to play out a bit longer is how he reacted to the fact that this boy was spider man :)Maybe i could write a Chapter where he remembers this part of the first conversation.

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Gorel - 7/15/2018 5:58 PM
I've always believed that a post around 1000-1500 words is a good chapter.
colleem - 7/15/2018 3:40 PM
Ups Lol
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I thought you were talking about the size of of the words used in the chapter. Anything less than 10 letters in a word and it's to be ignored!
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Solarsearcher - 7/15/2018 2:33 PM
Oh, you thought I was talking about “chapter” size...
colleem - 7/15/2018 1:28 PM
creating Atmosphere. Then it is good written i say :)
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i am with Solar :) Size matters IF it is used good :) Chapters should have a certain depth to the Story and should create an Atmosphere that is more than 200 Words long :) But it is hard to say a chapter is long or short! it has to be well written and
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Contrary to what you may or may not have been told... size matters...
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