by CJ - 8/20/2014 11:27 AM
Glad to see the addition from mcFan. It was well done, though I wondered about drugging the cigar smoke since wouldn't Ralph be dosed as well? I did really like the idea of conditioning the girls to obey and serve by getting them used to doing little things for Ralph like bring him drinks and preparing food.Has anyone had further ideas for what jobs they will perform. I know we came up with secretary work for Suzanne and waitress for Janice. But does anyone have ideas for what type of business it should be. Such as a law office, multinational corporation, etc.. Since the purpose is to show the worst of the upper crust it should have contact with wealthy clients. The thought ran through my mind to involve Stark possibly. Have Suzanne see the womanizer at his worst. Maybe have Sue insulted by Pepper for being a tart.Also have to admit to thinking about having both girls work as secretaries, what if the temp job for Janet was her company. Sort of like the undercover boss show seeing what things are like when she isn't there and they don't know who she is. Might be amusing to see her employees bad mouthing her and speaking what they really think and then when she comes back she realizes she can't fire them for it without revealing her secret life.The waitressing job while appropriately demeaning for Janet really doesn't seem to give much access to the upper crust of society to see corruption.Also had the new thought of a job as a maid or cleaning service. Possibly for the same building Janet lives in. See her neighbors in a new light as they boss her around and maybe gossip about her behind her back.Thoughts?
by mcFan - 8/22/2014 3:05 PM
I think maid works well for many purposes, as you get to interact with upper crust, but they may look down on you and could exhibit racism from the lady of the house and perhaps the man of the house hitting on her.
But the big question to me is what does Ralph want to get out of it? Does he want Janet and Sue to not want to go back to their old lives, to rebel against the hypocrisy and be true to themselves? Does he want them desperate so they would be willing to resort to prostitution or something along that slope, at least? Does he want them to enjoy the freedom of not having to maintain appearances or anything like that?
Maybe I'll try to write a Ralph-centered episode tonight, if I have time, and see if it goes anywhere.
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CorruptionCentral - 2/19/2017 2:56 PM
noname002j: You can fix your title. Click on the storyline for Miss Muscle (Left panel). From there you can edit chapter and add a title.
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Aye. Have the same Problems as you have Solar. When my Story reach a specific length it is over :(
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Nope, your not I'm having similar issues updating the Miss Muscle chapter I wrote, having screwed up the title link.
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SolarSearcher, The most characters from any of my recent chapters was a Gambit the Pimp chapter that had 13,000 words and that posted fine.
That being said, I think Colleem was having similar problems.
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No, my issue is a server error that doesn't let me post a chapter of 25,000 characters, nor does it allow me to update any chapters I post. Am I alone in this regard?
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If I do start a round the calander Holiday love slave story do we want to see Dipuc done as read?
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I have a lot of success using Google Chrome.
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