Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by exidor455 - 7/17/2014 10:51 AM

I'm in the mood to write more of the Mephisto thread, but I've kind of run out of ideas for it. Has anyone got any bolts of inspiration for me? Anything anyone wants to see happen in the story? Any other characters they'd like to see brought in? All suggestions welcome! :)


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by exidor455 - 7/17/2014 10:52 AM

Oops, sorry. Should have posted in the "addventure" section, not "site."


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by secondchance - 7/19/2014 8:55 PM

I'm interested (and pretty much back to normal health-wise, LOL) but am still short on time. Ideas that had based on where we left things was that:

1) Mephisto tries to vent the goodness flooding him into the mirror realm he trapped Sue's goodness in and causes a temporary rupture that she is able to exploit to escape back to earth (your idea). What I was thinking is that she is thrown into the body of a recently deceased woman that was being revived by EMT's so she doesn't look like Sue and has to convince people who she is.

2) The rupture in the mirror can only be plugged, not completely fixed so it takes concentration from the Hell Lord and is wearing on him to keep the taint of Hellcat's goodness from 'corrupting him. In the mean time, the now evil Hellcat tries to show the Hell Lord how madly in love with and devoted to him she is. Her sex with him distracts him and allows the goodness to weaken him while her successful attempts to seduce and enslave noble souls makes him jealous.

3) Jan and She Hulk, now chastised by the more powerful Sue demoness, concentrate on bringing other heroes into the Baxter Building to enslave them as well (and have fun playing with them).  Johnny, with Lustae invisibly on his shoulder is now happy to help them but really wants to get with Sue more than anything.  He eventually sneaks into Fiske Tower and instead of finding Sue, gets with MJ

5)  Some fun with Sue and MJ in their porn careers as each try to gather more power for their different masters.

Is any of that helpful? 


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by exidor455 - 7/20/2014 9:27 AM

Some intersting ideas there, Secondchance! I already had the pure Sue appear in Strange's sanctum but there might be some way around that... I will have a think and see if the muse strikes! Thanks. :)


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 8:47 AM

I am wondering that now that Johnny Storm is in Mephisto's realm with Lustae and Hellcat would Mephisto use him in some new way or to somehow bind him to be his slave as well?  If you think about it, his mind is very much open and susceptible to suggestion right now.  This would only take place I would think after Mephisto is 'cured' but it's what came to mind when reading the most reason chapter.Also, can't wait to see what's in store for Dr. Strange, Scarlet Witch and Succubus Sue.


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:17 AM

Yes, I've got some vague idea that Mephisto needs to do some arcane ritual to cure himself. Maybe he could trap the "good" part of himself in the mirror like he did with Sue, and maybe that's where Johnny comes in. Maybe some of his blood and/or his soul are needed to make the spell work, further sealing his fate as the plaything of Mephisto and Lustae?

I reckon Succubus Sue needs to make a move on the Scarlet Witch and Strange before they get to the bottom of things, but I haven't quite worked out how that's going to play out. Feel free to step in and write your own version! :)


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by colleem - 7/23/2014 11:08 AM

Not so sure about the characters but isn't strange the greatest magical being in the world. And scarlet isn't weak also. I would find it very strange if sue could even match one of them in his lair. But I like it that this story goes on again. It is more my kind of story :-) 


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:21 AM

Sue could share part of her 'evil seed' with Scarlet Witch as she did with She Hulk and the Wasp.  I don't know if it would solve the Dr. Strange as the greatest magical being out there thing but it would start to make Wanda a devout worshiper of Mephisto and perhaps start her own evil coven of witches (maybe even pulling those from other universes i.e. Willow from Buffy, Zatanna, The Charmed Ones come to mind) who work with Succubus Sue and the corrupted Fantastic Four to help Mephisto.  What would you think of that?I really like the idea of Johnny Storm's blood or soul helping to make the spell work.  At first he could be reluctant thinking 'what have I done' but once the spell is cast his soul is forever corrupted and its easier for Lustae to work on him.


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by secondchance - 7/23/2014 5:33 PM

As to Dr Strange being the most powerful mystic on the planet (or that reality really), it is all a matter of timing.  around 2010 the Vishanti took his sorcerer supreme title and extra powers.  I'm not sure he ever got them back.


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by ESchorcho - 7/27/2014 4:20 PM

exidor455, can you clarify something for me?  So evil, succubus Sue has been summoned to Dr. Strange and Scarlet Witch.  She says “I was…summoned. What do you need of me?”Is she still acting 'good' to the public, including the greater superhero community?


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by exidor455 - 7/28/2014 2:02 AM

ESchorcho - Good question! I suppose the public still think she's one of the good guys, yes. People think she's been trapped into her new porn career by the legal machinations of Kingpin. Her Succubus powers mean she can keep everyone thinking she's good and she can screen herself from even the scrying powers of Strange and Scarlet Witch so they'll be fooled too.


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by ESchorcho - 8/12/2014 11:44 PM

I am hoping to add to the storyline coming up here, but I have one question.  Hellcat really has just fallen into full-fledged servitude to Mephisto.  Would she be showing demonic traits?  I know that the corrupted Sue showed that she is a complete demon now, based on the chapter where she cursed out the evil She Hulk and Wasp.  But what about Hellcat?Speaking of She Hulk and Wasp (and The Thing and Alicia for that matter), would they start to be showing demonic traits in private?  I just see the corruption burning away all the good in them and that would manifest physically.  Plus, Reed's reaction to them transforming before his eyes would be fun to write.  What do you think about all this?


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by exidor455 - 8/13/2014 5:56 AM

That all sounds good to me! I suppose Hellcat and Sue are the more demonic and the people they've corrupted would be slightly less demonic, and so on. So, since Ben got corrupted by Alicia's Seed of Sin, he'd be the least demonic of the bunch. But there could be fun to be had with their different demonic transformations, and how Reed reacts it all, with his new programming. And Johnny hasn't been properly corrupted yet, but I think he should be soon. And he should finally get the encounter with Sue that he's been waiting for...  

I look forward to reading what you come up with! :)


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