Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by exidor455 - 7/17/2014 10:51 AM

I'm in the mood to write more of the Mephisto thread, but I've kind of run out of ideas for it. Has anyone got any bolts of inspiration for me? Anything anyone wants to see happen in the story? Any other characters they'd like to see brought in? All suggestions welcome! :)


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by exidor455 - 7/17/2014 10:52 AM

Oops, sorry. Should have posted in the "addventure" section, not "site."


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by secondchance - 7/19/2014 8:55 PM

I'm interested (and pretty much back to normal health-wise, LOL) but am still short on time. Ideas that had based on where we left things was that:

1) Mephisto tries to vent the goodness flooding him into the mirror realm he trapped Sue's goodness in and causes a temporary rupture that she is able to exploit to escape back to earth (your idea). What I was thinking is that she is thrown into the body of a recently deceased woman that was being revived by EMT's so she doesn't look like Sue and has to convince people who she is.

2) The rupture in the mirror can only be plugged, not completely fixed so it takes concentration from the Hell Lord and is wearing on him to keep the taint of Hellcat's goodness from 'corrupting him. In the mean time, the now evil Hellcat tries to show the Hell Lord how madly in love with and devoted to him she is. Her sex with him distracts him and allows the goodness to weaken him while her successful attempts to seduce and enslave noble souls makes him jealous.

3) Jan and She Hulk, now chastised by the more powerful Sue demoness, concentrate on bringing other heroes into the Baxter Building to enslave them as well (and have fun playing with them).  Johnny, with Lustae invisibly on his shoulder is now happy to help them but really wants to get with Sue more than anything.  He eventually sneaks into Fiske Tower and instead of finding Sue, gets with MJ

5)  Some fun with Sue and MJ in their porn careers as each try to gather more power for their different masters.

Is any of that helpful? 


RE: Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto continued?

by exidor455 - 7/20/2014 9:27 AM

Some intersting ideas there, Secondchance! I already had the pure Sue appear in Strange's sanctum but there might be some way around that... I will have a think and see if the muse strikes! Thanks. :)

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