by gothamalleyviper - 6/16/2014 4:21 AM
I got to say, you brought the characters into a dark and humiliating place fast and effectively. In the stories of characters being brought low, I have to say, good job!
by secondchance - 6/16/2014 6:28 AM
Exidor455: I agree with GAV. You so well at bringing out the darkness of the heroines as they fall into corruption. You also have a good pace to your writing. I especially like your addition to Vice Becomes her, but I am a bit biased on that one.
Unfortunately I tend not to be able to write as often as I like but I have a good idea for a Dina/Tina chapter that I am working on, but I have a good Lois idea for you if you're interested. I was thinking that Lois is attacked by a B-List villain to get Superman in a Kryptonite trap which, against all odds, actually seems to be working. As Superman is rallying the last fading shreds of his power for a last ditch effort to escape, instead of helping him as she use to do, Lois instead stops the Man of Steel and uses the Kryptonite to torture him. Once he collapses and can only helplessly watch, she dominates and fucks the villain into submission. When Superman wakes up, he is in his bed and Lois is tending him like a the good worried wife. She tells him that he was delirious from Kryptonite poisoning and what he saw was just a nightmare, but now Lois has a new 'client base'. Every week or two, another B-Lister takes his turn. Sound like something you would be interested in?
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by exidor455 - 6/16/2014 9:57 AM
Thanks guys! I like to explore the sexual dark side of otherwise good and virtuous ladies, but some of my ideas might not be to everyone's taste!
Secondchance - That sounds like a fine idea to me. Unfortunately I'm not too well versed in the DC universe so wouldn't be sure which were the best villains to introduce, but I'm more than happy for you to expand and/or make suggestions. :)
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C.King - 2/1/2015 1:00 PM
Like Katy Perry or Kate Upton dating this or that hero...
gothamalleyviper - 2/1/2015 10:37 AM
"TMZ: The ladies of Tony Stark / Bruce Wanye Tell all?" "Johnny Storm Gone Wild" video series?
C.King - 2/1/2015 10:25 AM
Would you read about a fictional character like a superhero having a relationship/sex with a real celebrity?
solddate - 1/23/2015 7:25 AM
Hey, cliff, don't worry, I hear ya. I'm sorry for the silent treatment, I'm just trying to at least have something to show ya with your Harley line. I'll email ya tonight. ^^'
clifford.cao - 1/22/2015 6:29 PM
Solddate (and any other fans of HHH), in case you don't know already: the next couple installments of Harley's Heroine Heist are good to go.
colleem - 1/22/2015 11:37 AM
Hello Superstories. Is it Possible that you can change the Message Board so that the newest Post will be on the Top when you open it? Some of them are very long now and so we have to scroll down very much :)
ESchorcho - 1/17/2015 11:45 AM
I have about 5 Mephisto chapters that I'm cooking up and will post on Sunday. Got writing and couldn't stop, so if everyone can hold off on adding. Sorry it's taking forever to get done.
exidor455 - 1/17/2015 5:13 AM
I've added a new chapter to the Mephisto strand of SSSL, in the hope that it will get it rolling again. As usual, feel free to add ideas, chapters, etc. :)
chinky_natasha - 1/13/2015 6:20 PM
I tried with one chapter of the famous SSSL, it is roughly based on Captain America 2 : Winter Soldier with Hydra infiltrating SHIELD premise.
Feel free to give me some feedback. Enjoy.
izenrann - 1/13/2015 4:54 AM
Added more to Medieval Madness! Check it out!
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