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by gothamalleyviper - 6/16/2014 4:21 AM

I got to say, you brought the characters into a dark and humiliating place fast and effectively.  In the stories of characters being brought low, I have to say, good job!


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by secondchance - 6/16/2014 6:28 AM

Exidor455:  I agree with GAV.  You so well at bringing out the darkness of the heroines as they fall into corruption. You also have a good pace to your writing.   I especially like your addition to Vice Becomes her, but I am a bit biased on that one.

Unfortunately I tend not to be able to write as often as I like but I have a good idea for a Dina/Tina chapter that I am working on, but I have a good Lois idea for you if you're interested.  I was thinking that Lois is attacked by a B-List villain to get Superman in a Kryptonite trap which, against all odds, actually seems to be working.  As Superman is rallying the last fading shreds of his power for a last ditch effort to escape, instead of helping him as she use to do, Lois instead stops the Man of Steel and uses the Kryptonite to torture him.  Once he collapses and can only helplessly watch, she dominates and fucks the villain into submission.  When Superman wakes up, he is in his bed and Lois is tending him like a the good worried wife.  She tells him that he was delirious from Kryptonite poisoning and what he saw was just a nightmare, but now Lois has a new 'client base'.  Every week or two, another B-Lister takes his turn.  Sound like something you would be interested in?

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misbegotten2 - 8/24/2016 2:49 PM
ESchorcho--thanks for the compliment. Will try to have more up tomorrow or Friday.
Gorel - 8/23/2016 11:03 PM
Hey Fanficfetishist, I'm giving it some time if you want to add to Rogue Appetites, if not just let me know.
ESchorcho - 8/22/2016 5:01 PM
Great Bimbotech chapter, misbegotten2!
Gorel - 8/21/2016 7:32 PM
RL claims us all from time to time... She is a harsh mistress.
Fanfic Fetishist - 8/21/2016 7:22 PM
I'm sorry I haven't been contributing much. RL responsibilities affecting my will to write.
Yang Xiao Long - 8/21/2016 6:58 PM
I'll have a Devilish Woman chapter up either tonight or tomorrow.
Yang Xiao Long - 8/21/2016 3:50 PM
I don't have any ideas for Meanest Bitch of All either. I am writting something for Devilish Woman though.
Darth Elsa - 8/20/2016 10:41 PM
Not at the moment Niva. If you want to add a chapter you can.
Niva - 8/20/2016 5:42 PM
Any new ideas for "The Meanest Bitch of All"?
ESchorcho - 8/20/2016 1:00 PM
Sorry, GAV, for the delay. If you have the time and an idea for a new Rubber Queen chapter by all means please write it.



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