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by gothamalleyviper - 6/16/2014 4:21 AM

I got to say, you brought the characters into a dark and humiliating place fast and effectively.  In the stories of characters being brought low, I have to say, good job!


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by secondchance - 6/16/2014 6:28 AM

Exidor455:  I agree with GAV.  You so well at bringing out the darkness of the heroines as they fall into corruption. You also have a good pace to your writing.   I especially like your addition to Vice Becomes her, but I am a bit biased on that one.

Unfortunately I tend not to be able to write as often as I like but I have a good idea for a Dina/Tina chapter that I am working on, but I have a good Lois idea for you if you're interested.  I was thinking that Lois is attacked by a B-List villain to get Superman in a Kryptonite trap which, against all odds, actually seems to be working.  As Superman is rallying the last fading shreds of his power for a last ditch effort to escape, instead of helping him as she use to do, Lois instead stops the Man of Steel and uses the Kryptonite to torture him.  Once he collapses and can only helplessly watch, she dominates and fucks the villain into submission.  When Superman wakes up, he is in his bed and Lois is tending him like a the good worried wife.  She tells him that he was delirious from Kryptonite poisoning and what he saw was just a nightmare, but now Lois has a new 'client base'.  Every week or two, another B-Lister takes his turn.  Sound like something you would be interested in?

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colleem - 9/5/2015 4:03 AM
would also like to see how it would be going in an Marvel/Dc world :) maybe it could even be the same enemies that Killed Martians Manhunters race :P
CorruptionCentral - 9/4/2015 6:31 PM
Busty Invaders from Mars sounds like a great storyline to me. I've only seen the first few minutes of it but it looks pretty fun.
C.King - 9/4/2015 5:35 PM
In the manner of 1950's B movies.Save for sex scenes, all in black and white.
C.King - 9/4/2015 5:34 PM
Sexy Pornstars like Lisa Ann as aliens who conquer Earth with boob powers and mind blowing sex which turns men into their zombie slaves
mercury01 - 9/4/2015 12:07 PM
I'm not familiar with Busty Invaders from Mars, but I like the sound of it.
C.King - 9/3/2015 9:14 PM
Anyone interested in a storyline based on Wicked's Busty Invaders from Mars?
Fanfic Fetishist - 9/2/2015 10:50 PM
Note that in my version of Proxy Conquerers, for the first chapter, the chosen proxy will wake up unaware of the changes, still remembering the old world.
LesLes - 8/31/2015 1:41 PM
Yes, and I don't know any way to fix it :-( Hopefully @superstories can delete the bad entry?
colleem - 8/31/2015 1:39 PM
I think this went wrong lesles :)
C.King - 8/29/2015 12:10 PM
Two ideas posted in Boards. One on Addvenure and on by accident on site.



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