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by gothamalleyviper - 6/16/2014 4:21 AM

I got to say, you brought the characters into a dark and humiliating place fast and effectively.  In the stories of characters being brought low, I have to say, good job!


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by secondchance - 6/16/2014 6:28 AM

Exidor455:  I agree with GAV.  You so well at bringing out the darkness of the heroines as they fall into corruption. You also have a good pace to your writing.   I especially like your addition to Vice Becomes her, but I am a bit biased on that one.

Unfortunately I tend not to be able to write as often as I like but I have a good idea for a Dina/Tina chapter that I am working on, but I have a good Lois idea for you if you're interested.  I was thinking that Lois is attacked by a B-List villain to get Superman in a Kryptonite trap which, against all odds, actually seems to be working.  As Superman is rallying the last fading shreds of his power for a last ditch effort to escape, instead of helping him as she use to do, Lois instead stops the Man of Steel and uses the Kryptonite to torture him.  Once he collapses and can only helplessly watch, she dominates and fucks the villain into submission.  When Superman wakes up, he is in his bed and Lois is tending him like a the good worried wife.  She tells him that he was delirious from Kryptonite poisoning and what he saw was just a nightmare, but now Lois has a new 'client base'.  Every week or two, another B-Lister takes his turn.  Sound like something you would be interested in?

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Darth Elsa - 6/23/2016 10:52 PM
If anyone wants to add a Chapter to "Wasp: Devilish Woman" go on ahead.
Darth Elsa - 6/23/2016 7:27 PM
Alright, got a new idea for a story up. Will try and do something with Meanest Bitch soon. Sorry for the rushed pace of this first chapter, really tired my best to make it as good as I could
gothamalleyviper - 6/20/2016 1:27 PM
Posted, feed back welcomed
ESchorcho - 6/19/2016 11:35 PM
gothamalleyviper, check the message board. Could use your thoughts on Rubber Queen. Thanks.
Darth Elsa - 6/19/2016 9:02 PM
Will try and write something tomorrow, have had some writters block
gothamalleyviper - 6/19/2016 1:08 PM
Put thoughts in message board
CorruptionCentral - 6/19/2016 12:31 PM
GAV, Interesting topic for the Riddler. I would be interested in seeing what you're thinking.
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Hyperion, I love the new additions to the Hydro-Woman story. Keep up the good work.
colleem - 6/19/2016 12:03 PM
gotham :) do not know enough of the riddler and do not find him very cool :) but your always welcome in one of mine ^^
gothamalleyviper - 6/19/2016 11:10 AM
Had a thought, anyone interested in a Edward Nimga / Riddler Harem building story? Also anyone want me to work on any particular stories?



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