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by gothamalleyviper - 6/16/2014 4:21 AM

I got to say, you brought the characters into a dark and humiliating place fast and effectively.  In the stories of characters being brought low, I have to say, good job!


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by secondchance - 6/16/2014 6:28 AM

Exidor455:  I agree with GAV.  You so well at bringing out the darkness of the heroines as they fall into corruption. You also have a good pace to your writing.   I especially like your addition to Vice Becomes her, but I am a bit biased on that one.

Unfortunately I tend not to be able to write as often as I like but I have a good idea for a Dina/Tina chapter that I am working on, but I have a good Lois idea for you if you're interested.  I was thinking that Lois is attacked by a B-List villain to get Superman in a Kryptonite trap which, against all odds, actually seems to be working.  As Superman is rallying the last fading shreds of his power for a last ditch effort to escape, instead of helping him as she use to do, Lois instead stops the Man of Steel and uses the Kryptonite to torture him.  Once he collapses and can only helplessly watch, she dominates and fucks the villain into submission.  When Superman wakes up, he is in his bed and Lois is tending him like a the good worried wife.  She tells him that he was delirious from Kryptonite poisoning and what he saw was just a nightmare, but now Lois has a new 'client base'.  Every week or two, another B-Lister takes his turn.  Sound like something you would be interested in?

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Dank. Whatcha need?
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I plan on continuing writing, but I was finding myself in a bit of a sticky situation... I need help describing the settings and such. I have been sticking to what I can do for a long time and I really wanted to try something new. By the way thanks Cal
Cal512 - 6/20/2017 11:44 AM
Darknoodle, there is that Ann Weying fanfic on DA and fanfiction.net Granted it's not very long atm.
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Danknoodle420, it's an erotic fanfic-themed addventure.
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I literally spent hours searching for a Symbiote fanfic that isn't just based COMPLETELY on sexual activities. But I had came to a conclusion that it's impossible. Feel free to message me if you found a really good one or made one yourself. I'd love to
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Apologies for the long delay in posting. Life's been a bit crazy lately. Jimmy, remind me to update Hard Reboot on the wall if I don't get to it soon.
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Apologies for the long delay in posting. Life's been a bit crazy lately. Jimmy, remind me to update Hard Reboot on the wall if I don't get to it soon.
symdude90 - 6/19/2017 8:10 AM
@Danknoodle420 nice job on those last two chapters! The quality of your work continues to improve with every chapter! Keep up the great work!
CorruptionCentral - 6/19/2017 4:31 AM
hoya: Maybe I didn't say it well. Sorry for confusion or inaccuracy. I hope it didn't ruin the story for you.
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Hoya: Thanks. I'm aware that exec orders are not law. The idea was to get a congressman to add the order as a rider to a bill, sight unseen. maybe that's not possible.



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