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by gothamalleyviper - 6/16/2014 4:21 AM

I got to say, you brought the characters into a dark and humiliating place fast and effectively.  In the stories of characters being brought low, I have to say, good job!


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by secondchance - 6/16/2014 6:28 AM

Exidor455:  I agree with GAV.  You so well at bringing out the darkness of the heroines as they fall into corruption. You also have a good pace to your writing.   I especially like your addition to Vice Becomes her, but I am a bit biased on that one.

Unfortunately I tend not to be able to write as often as I like but I have a good idea for a Dina/Tina chapter that I am working on, but I have a good Lois idea for you if you're interested.  I was thinking that Lois is attacked by a B-List villain to get Superman in a Kryptonite trap which, against all odds, actually seems to be working.  As Superman is rallying the last fading shreds of his power for a last ditch effort to escape, instead of helping him as she use to do, Lois instead stops the Man of Steel and uses the Kryptonite to torture him.  Once he collapses and can only helplessly watch, she dominates and fucks the villain into submission.  When Superman wakes up, he is in his bed and Lois is tending him like a the good worried wife.  She tells him that he was delirious from Kryptonite poisoning and what he saw was just a nightmare, but now Lois has a new 'client base'.  Every week or two, another B-Lister takes his turn.  Sound like something you would be interested in?

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Fanfic Fetishist - 4/29/2017 7:41 PM
Heisonso, I don't think there is right now. When I click 'update profile' on my profile I just get an error message.
colleem - 4/29/2017 1:24 AM
Great chapter eschorcho. Really great
LesLes - 4/28/2017 5:22 PM
Enjoying your chapters @kingofthefarmyard1. And voting for Naughty Nurse!
heisonso1234 - 4/26/2017 7:51 AM
How to change my username????
Yang Xiao Long - 4/25/2017 10:18 PM
Sorry it's so short. I had a much longer chapter, but the site crashed or something making me lose it. This is all I could remember typing up on the third time trying to rewrite it.
Yang Xiao Long - 4/25/2017 5:31 PM
Will post a Pink Lantern chapter tonight, and will be posting a Harem App chapter on Saturday
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How to change my username?
JimmyKasche - 4/24/2017 11:52 PM
not a problem.
Yang Xiao Long - 4/24/2017 11:42 PM
Yeah. I'll have it up tomorrow, been a bit busy
JimmyKasche - 4/24/2017 8:53 PM
Hey Yang Xiao Long, are you still working on a Pink Lanterns chapter?



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