Help with new Addventures

by Sailor Mercury - 5/15/2014 8:11 PM

I have been working on some new adventures for a while now, but all I have at this point is just some rough ideas. I have no ideas for beginnings for these.

 

First is "Telepath Triple Threat!!!":

A man brainwashes Psylocke, Dark Phoenix, and Emma Frost, into his loyal servants, and has them rewrite the minds of heroines and make them his slaves.


RE: Help with new Addventures

by Blue_Man - 5/19/2014 9:34 AM

Hmmm, would you mind if I tried my hand at this?Are you thinking about a beginning in media res, with the three already enslaved and corrupted, or would you prefer to see each of them falling one after the other, before the real fun begins?


RE: Help with new Addventures

by Sailor Mercury - 5/19/2014 10:12 AM

Each of them falling at before the real fun begins was what I was thinking.


RE: Help with new Addventures

by LesLes - 6/1/2014 6:05 PM

I had this half-written when I saw Blue_Man's excellent start. I hope no-one minds me adding mine to the mix.I'm all about the lady-loving but I've hopefully left a few ways to leave a man in charge if that's what you'd prefer. The sorceress can use glamors so maybe her being female is a disguise. Or maybe she's the slave of someone else who the Mummudrai will be instructed to obey. But don't stop me from keeping it lesbian ;)The Mummudrai are based on the versions from the recent X-Force run (issues 9 to 12 or so), but the details don't really matter. They're basically evil alternative universe versions of the familiar telepaths except that they have the advantage of having been watching the originals right up to the moment they were summoned, and knowing pretty much everything they do. Makes the disguise much easier if necessary!


RE: Help with new Addventures

by Sailor Mercury - 6/1/2014 8:44 PM

I love both!


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CorruptionCentral - 8/17/2014 1:02 PM
Great job mcFan
ESchorcho - 8/15/2014 11:19 AM
MacroLass, Master_Kind, check the message board.
CorruptionCentral - 8/13/2014 4:56 PM
Exidor: Thanks! Glad you are enjoying.
exidor455 - 8/13/2014 7:02 AM
CorruptionCentral - I love what you're doing with the new "Negative Zone" strand in Sue Storm's Secret Life! :)
CorruptionCentral - 8/12/2014 10:35 PM
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aspiringactor - 8/12/2014 8:55 PM
There's a new chapter for 'Black Queen' up.
ESchorcho - 8/12/2014 8:56 AM
MacroLass, Master_Kind - check the message board for some X-Men Stepford talk.
C.King - 8/10/2014 7:46 PM
Had an idea of having Mistress Bianca search her website for supers or those that know them. This is close too.
gothamalleyviper - 8/10/2014 7:16 PM
C.King, do you like? Colleem, I will hit G I Joe then back to Purple
colleem - 8/10/2014 4:32 PM
Sorry I couldn't help you more. Maybe next time you have a question



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