Help with new Addventures

by Sailor Mercury - 5/15/2014 8:11 PM

I have been working on some new adventures for a while now, but all I have at this point is just some rough ideas. I have no ideas for beginnings for these.

 

First is "Telepath Triple Threat!!!":

A man brainwashes Psylocke, Dark Phoenix, and Emma Frost, into his loyal servants, and has them rewrite the minds of heroines and make them his slaves.


RE: Help with new Addventures

by Blue_Man - 5/19/2014 9:34 AM

Hmmm, would you mind if I tried my hand at this?Are you thinking about a beginning in media res, with the three already enslaved and corrupted, or would you prefer to see each of them falling one after the other, before the real fun begins?


RE: Help with new Addventures

by Sailor Mercury - 5/19/2014 10:12 AM

Each of them falling at before the real fun begins was what I was thinking.


RE: Help with new Addventures

by LesLes - 6/1/2014 6:05 PM

I had this half-written when I saw Blue_Man's excellent start. I hope no-one minds me adding mine to the mix.I'm all about the lady-loving but I've hopefully left a few ways to leave a man in charge if that's what you'd prefer. The sorceress can use glamors so maybe her being female is a disguise. Or maybe she's the slave of someone else who the Mummudrai will be instructed to obey. But don't stop me from keeping it lesbian ;)The Mummudrai are based on the versions from the recent X-Force run (issues 9 to 12 or so), but the details don't really matter. They're basically evil alternative universe versions of the familiar telepaths except that they have the advantage of having been watching the originals right up to the moment they were summoned, and knowing pretty much everything they do. Makes the disguise much easier if necessary!

-RE: Help with new Addventures by Sailor Mercury - 6/1/2014 8:44 PM

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exidor455 - 8/1/2014 7:17 AM
Xuxa works fine for me because I'd never heard of that other one.
CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
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colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.



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