Chapters with only a few Lines

by colleem - 4/4/2014 2:03 AM

So :) lets finish it here because i am no member of yahoo :) dont tell me about to long chapters^^ i think most of mine are way to long :)


RE: Chapters with only a few Lines

by solddate - 4/4/2014 2:30 AM

Aye, but it allows for detail and action, which is what I want to see. To me the extremely short chapters are just people trying to dictate where the story goes without adding anything themselves. I know this isn't always the writer's intent, but that's how it feels.

I write long chapters to try and coax someone into wanting to read and thus write more of the storyline. I hope people will expand on my ideas, but I'm always happy to see theirs if they take the time to flesh it out slightly and make it fit with what's been included before. Unfortunately, I can never really enjoy my own work and very few people add to what I do.

-RE: Chapters with only a few Lines by colleem - 4/4/2014 2:53 AM
--RE: Chapters with only a few Lines by CorruptionCentral - 4/5/2014 7:31 AM
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heisonso1234 - 4/26/2017 7:51 AM
How to change my username????
Yang Xiao Long - 4/25/2017 10:18 PM
Sorry it's so short. I had a much longer chapter, but the site crashed or something making me lose it. This is all I could remember typing up on the third time trying to rewrite it.
Yang Xiao Long - 4/25/2017 5:31 PM
Will post a Pink Lantern chapter tonight, and will be posting a Harem App chapter on Saturday
heisonso1234 - 4/25/2017 4:17 AM
How to change my username?
JimmyKasche - 4/24/2017 11:52 PM
not a problem.
Yang Xiao Long - 4/24/2017 11:42 PM
Yeah. I'll have it up tomorrow, been a bit busy
JimmyKasche - 4/24/2017 8:53 PM
Hey Yang Xiao Long, are you still working on a Pink Lanterns chapter?
colleem - 4/24/2017 3:40 PM
Message Field or write me an Email
colleem - 4/24/2017 3:39 PM
I will start tomorrow with the Chapter. Will keep you updated but i fear it will at least go until the Weekend if this isnĀ“t a Problem. :) If you want to see anything specific inside the Chapter, something you need for your next Post, just inform me in
Gorel - 4/24/2017 3:33 PM
You're more than welcome to add Colleem. I'm anxious to see.



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