Masterplan

by colleem - 3/4/2014 5:38 AM

What do you think about Masterplan. Should we let Lois finally fall in love with lex? Should lex find out who Clark is? I like the fact that he dont know it and the story between the chars 


RE: Masterplan

by CorruptionCentral - 3/4/2014 6:34 AM

Here is my opinion.  I think Lois should admit to Lex she loves him and fully embrace what that means, but her duty to her friend Clark still prevents her from telling Lex who her husband truly is. This having to hold back weighs heavily on the woman it isn't long before Lex picks up on this.  He takes the path of the caring supportive lover to get this piece of information she his hiding and quickly realizes that it has something to do with Superman.  In one of the rare moments where his intuition misses the mark, he believes that Clark is the one that knows the Man of Steels secrets. When is asks Lois if his suspicion is correct, she honestly answers that he does and Lex then concentrates on trying to use his mind control devices to get Clark to tell Lex everything.

Love the story :)


RE: Masterplan

by colleem - 3/4/2014 8:36 AM

Mhm Sounds like a good Idea. I even have a litte Idea how to manage it maybe. It is time that she will open herself to the Subliminals that she had gotten and finally betrays Clark :)Glad you like it. Took some time to found the Will to write again but i saw so great new stories that i had to. 


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colleem - 12/11/2017 8:16 PM
Questions in the board for gorel and Gotham
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colleem - 12/10/2017 1:24 AM
welcome to the story gotham :) Nice chapter Gorel :) maybe i will write a harley chapter after gotham :)
gothamalleyviper - 12/9/2017 11:42 PM
I have an idea to add for the Batman vs Dracula will try to get it tomorrow
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Its working now, lets not jinx it!
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how can I add if the site keeps crashing everytime I try to submit anything?
Gorel - 12/7/2017 7:44 PM
Great addition Colleem, I'll try to do a follow up as Batman.
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Escorcho, yeah it was just weird that the choices got wiped when it got posted.
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