Masterplan

by colleem - 3/4/2014 5:38 AM

What do you think about Masterplan. Should we let Lois finally fall in love with lex? Should lex find out who Clark is? I like the fact that he dont know it and the story between the chars 


RE: Masterplan

by CorruptionCentral - 3/4/2014 6:34 AM

Here is my opinion.  I think Lois should admit to Lex she loves him and fully embrace what that means, but her duty to her friend Clark still prevents her from telling Lex who her husband truly is. This having to hold back weighs heavily on the woman it isn't long before Lex picks up on this.  He takes the path of the caring supportive lover to get this piece of information she his hiding and quickly realizes that it has something to do with Superman.  In one of the rare moments where his intuition misses the mark, he believes that Clark is the one that knows the Man of Steels secrets. When is asks Lois if his suspicion is correct, she honestly answers that he does and Lex then concentrates on trying to use his mind control devices to get Clark to tell Lex everything.

Love the story :)


RE: Masterplan

by colleem - 3/4/2014 8:36 AM

Mhm Sounds like a good Idea. I even have a litte Idea how to manage it maybe. It is time that she will open herself to the Subliminals that she had gotten and finally betrays Clark :)Glad you like it. Took some time to found the Will to write again but i saw so great new stories that i had to. 


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CorruptionCentral - 3/4/2015 9:22 PM
CJ, Good to see you posting again & nice start to a new twist on the Susan Storm's Secret Life
ESchorcho - 3/4/2015 7:39 PM
I am pretty busy but I'll see what I can do.
misbegotten2 - 3/4/2015 2:00 PM
go ahead and post.
misbegotten2 - 3/4/2015 1:59 PM
ESchorcho-in a few days? My CPU died and is currently in the shop. But if you got an idea ready to go
ESchorcho - 3/4/2015 9:18 AM
misbegotton2, any update on the Fuckdoll Finishing School?
CorruptionCentral - 3/2/2015 6:22 PM
Exidor: Yup, I've done it too. BTW, very enjoyable chapter
ESchorcho - 3/2/2015 8:23 AM
I've made that same mistake, exidor. You're not alone.
exidor455 - 3/2/2015 7:29 AM
Posted a new Mephisto chapter of SSSL, then realised I followed up the wrong chapter! Oh well, I don't suppose it matters. :)
gothamalleyviper - 2/27/2015 6:45 AM
Random Idea: Lesbian Perfume. Center female character gets dunked and then while she stays straight every woman in close proximity has an instant need to have lesbian sex with her. Thoughts?
misbegotten2 - 2/24/2015 2:37 PM
Eschorcho, it's cool, I'll probably have a new chapter up tomorrow or Thursday.



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