Masterplan

by colleem - 3/4/2014 5:38 AM

What do you think about Masterplan. Should we let Lois finally fall in love with lex? Should lex find out who Clark is? I like the fact that he dont know it and the story between the chars 


RE: Masterplan

by CorruptionCentral - 3/4/2014 6:34 AM

Here is my opinion.  I think Lois should admit to Lex she loves him and fully embrace what that means, but her duty to her friend Clark still prevents her from telling Lex who her husband truly is. This having to hold back weighs heavily on the woman it isn't long before Lex picks up on this.  He takes the path of the caring supportive lover to get this piece of information she his hiding and quickly realizes that it has something to do with Superman.  In one of the rare moments where his intuition misses the mark, he believes that Clark is the one that knows the Man of Steels secrets. When is asks Lois if his suspicion is correct, she honestly answers that he does and Lex then concentrates on trying to use his mind control devices to get Clark to tell Lex everything.

Love the story :)

-RE: Masterplan by colleem - 3/4/2014 8:36 AM

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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
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>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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