Masterplan

by colleem - 3/4/2014 5:38 AM

What do you think about Masterplan. Should we let Lois finally fall in love with lex? Should lex find out who Clark is? I like the fact that he dont know it and the story between the chars 


RE: Masterplan

by CorruptionCentral - 3/4/2014 6:34 AM

Here is my opinion.  I think Lois should admit to Lex she loves him and fully embrace what that means, but her duty to her friend Clark still prevents her from telling Lex who her husband truly is. This having to hold back weighs heavily on the woman it isn't long before Lex picks up on this.  He takes the path of the caring supportive lover to get this piece of information she his hiding and quickly realizes that it has something to do with Superman.  In one of the rare moments where his intuition misses the mark, he believes that Clark is the one that knows the Man of Steels secrets. When is asks Lois if his suspicion is correct, she honestly answers that he does and Lex then concentrates on trying to use his mind control devices to get Clark to tell Lex everything.

Love the story :)

-RE: Masterplan by colleem - 3/4/2014 8:36 AM

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