Discussion of Susan's Secret Life

by CorruptionCentral - 2/21/2014 9:32 PM

I thought I would take an opportunity to start a discussion of the 'sleazy reporter' variant of the "Susan's Secret Life" Storyline.  I thought this might be a better idea than posting extremely long potential chapters as the story progresses.  The first thing I thought might be helpful is suggestions of how to keep Susan's family out of her business now that she is so heavily involved in stripping engagements and practice for several weeks. As I can see it, there are two ways to accomplish this.

The first method of keeping everyone out of her business would be to come up with an airtight reason she is missing 6 nights a week.  Here are my thoughts on that:

  • Sue could have a Medusa of the Inhumans provide a fake excuse that she is needed there either for defense of their people, negotiations with another culture, or possibly as a contributor to an interstellar conference on female rights. (I don't recommend defense as the whole family would be constantly looking for any excuse to look in on them to make sure Sue is OK)
  • Sue could have someone like Black Widow or Ms Marvel  tell the family that Sue is on a secret mission for SHIELD
  • Sue could set up with the Avengers to be a late night monitor duty for several weeks.  Instead of actually doing the work for the Avengers she could send a Life Model Decoy of her while the real Sue does her stripper work

Another method is to set up each of the Fantastic Four men with things that will occupy them:

  • Reed:
    • A long term project to observe a new universe about to be born via its own big bang.  Sue could talk to Dr Alyssa Moy, a colleague of Reed's that also use to be a girl friend of his long ago.  Alyssa would jump at the chance and Reed couldn't resist the project as long as Sue was OK with it. (normally she wouldn't be, but with the drive her being drugged is causing she might push her normal objections out of the way to continue stripping.
  • Johnny
    • Set Johnny up with a lady extreme sports promoter who has been after him to go on tour. 
    • Get Johnny a role in a Hollywood movie production that will take him out of town for a couple months
  • Ben
    • Set up on a long trip with his girlfriend
    • Set Ben up with one of the other strippers friends that has a thing for him & will keep him too busy to notice Sue's late nights
    • Get Ben a temporary spot on one of the remaining west coast/Hawaii '50 states initiative' as a team lead/instructor

I just offer these ideas in hopes that it helps.  Thanks to the originator and the contributors for giving  us something to enjoy and look forward to :-D


RE: Discussion of Susan's Secret Life

by CJ - 2/22/2014 12:25 AM

I think it would be best to mix and match the two methods.  I kind of like the Medusa option but it comes with the issue of how does she convince Medusa to do this for her.  I don't know the character very well and wouldn't know how to write this.

I really like the working for SHIELD option as well and have thought of a was to spin it.  One of the options tacked onto the latest chapter with Suzanne costume shopping has Sue encountering another heroine while stripping, this would give Sue leverage to get cooperation from the other heroine and also brings up the possibility of Ralph asking for her services in the future after Sue slips up and mentions her when talking about her excuse.

The option with Reed and the other scientist he used to date would roll well with where I see the story going in the future.  I had the thought after a slipup resulting in a one night stand (which she enjoyed) that Sue was scared straight from guilt for a while and then after Reed neglecting her she would seek out the 'Suzanne' life again and actually escalate by being open to prostitution.  Could easily have it to that Reed misses an anniversery or B-day dinner that Sue went through a lot of trouble to arrange only for her to find him in the lab with Alyssa (maybe standing too close or even better she tripped and he caught her in a suggestive pose just as Sue walks in).  Sue in jealousy and spite turns to her secret life for sexual relief and people who give her attention.

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