by BatPimp - 6/24/2013 2:56 AM
To CALIBAN3K: I opened that message board so that we can plan Pandora's new adventure.
I have an idea for a new villain: Sir Rodshire was a serial rapist in the middle of the 19nth century who tried to cut a deal with a demon, because he had finally been caught by the police. The demon however tricked him and Sir Rodshire has been stuck as a
ghost ever since. He uses his mystic powers to possess people and commit crimes in their names.
What do you think?
by CALIBAN3K - 6/24/2013 10:13 AM
As far as you consider Sir Rodshire as a ghost, capable of transfer his incorporeal will to his victims (only men or men and women?'') as the villain of "Fallen" (A 1998 Dezel Washington movie), I like the idea. Not really powerful but with experience
and malevolence enough to put in jeopardy Pandora. So, I suppose that he can only control his victim while he is into him, doesn´t he? If don´t, which is the limitations of his power?
Just a few details:
- Is he visible on his incorporeal body or is he totally invisible, only 'visible' by ghost hunter´s devices? (I admit it. I follow "Ghost adventures" show!!!!).
- I imagine the motivations of Sir Rodshire but, what does the demon get with that?
As aditional comment, you describe Sir Rodshire as a ghost that have plenty control of his power. Somehow, what about if he is just a kind of almost irrational incubus fed by his need (as a vital requirement to survive) of rape to others. What do you think
Also, I was thinking about Peggy the housewife as foe for Pandora, a woman whose husband left her due to he liked too much to assit to Strip Joints. Now, almost insane, Peggy blames Pandora of that. Any suggestion about this?
by BatPimp - 6/24/2013 4:28 PM
- To answer your first question: I picture this villain to be a lot like Deadman (from DC), except that Deadman was good instead of evil. So Sir Rodshire is invisible to normal people (only experienced magic users can actually 'feel' him) and he can only
control one person at a time by possessing them (he can possess anyone however, only powerful magicians would be able to 'repel' him).
- To answer your second question: Sir Rodshire made a deal with a demon, because he expected to get enough powers to escape the law. Instead, the demon turned Sir Rodshire into an immortal ghost and as long as the ghost exists (undead don't really 'live', do
they?) the demon gets some kind of 'energy' every time Sir Rodshire commits a sin. Although Sir Rodshire doesn't need to do anything, he won't 'die' if he doesn't do anything. He has the possibility to sit around and do nothing, but instead he commits crimes,
because he is a sick person and he takes pleasure in it. It's as simple (and twisted) as that.
As for Peggy, she can make an amazing goofy villain (contrary to Sir Rodshire who is a more serious villain). You know, the kind that are easily taken down, but always come back at the worst moment. Though I think you should at least give her a silly super-power
by CALIBAN3K - 6/25/2013 10:56 AM
I understand you and it sounds interesting for me (though a bit serious with the idea that I have in mind about Pandora´s background). Let´s make it,. Somehow, I will not able to post anything in the next two weeks. Do I start the story or do you prefer
to define the background of it?
About Peggy, what kind of silly power or mutation have you in mind? Because I was thinking on the ability to become in a mass of fatty flesh (a large Lady Obese) or an special disgusting belch or fart. Which "special" power would you like to see on her?
by BatPimp - 6/25/2013 3:26 PM
I'll let you start the story (writing the first chapter, and so on...), since the Boob-verse is your AU.
As for Peggy, I had two versions in mind:
1) She could have super-strength, so that she can use 'housewife' weapons, like giant frying pans, extra sharp kitchen knives...
2) Your idea is quite good, but I was thinking about something more in the line of Bouncing Boy's powers: the ability to inflate like a balloon and bounce on walls.
by CALIBAN3K - 7/5/2013 11:18 AM
Hi. I have just added the first chapter of the new storyline of Pandora. Hope you find on it the ideal background to introduce Mr RodShire. After all, he is your character.
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