by Shendude - 1/2/2013 2:59 PM
So, last month I started a story, "The Fantastic Four's New Mission". My initial chapter got a five rating and was extended later that day.
About a week later, I extended the extension. This chapter got a one rating and hasn't been expanded.
I'm tyring to figure out what I did wrong. As I see it there are several possibilities:
-I briefly had an M/M scene, which may have turned some people off.
-I had Franklin getting a blowjob from Val, which probably turned some people off.
-I waited too long.
-My writing isn't very good.
-The base concept is unpopular.
Would you folks mind helping me find out A: what I did wrong, and B: how I can revive the story?