So, what is wrong with this story?

by Shendude - 1/2/2013 2:59 PM

So, last month I started a story, "The Fantastic Four's New Mission". My initial chapter got a five rating and was extended later that day.

About a week later, I extended the extension. This chapter got a one rating and hasn't been expanded.

I'm tyring to figure out what I did wrong. As I see it there are several possibilities:

-I briefly had an M/M scene, which may have turned some people off.

-I had Franklin getting a blowjob from Val, which probably turned some people off.

-I waited too long.

-My writing isn't very good.

-The base concept is unpopular.

Would you folks mind helping me find out A: what I did wrong, and B: how I can revive the story?

-RE: So, what is wrong with this story? by C.King - 1/8/2013 10:58 AM
--RE: So, what is wrong with this story? by Evva - 1/13/2013 8:18 AM
---RE: So, what is wrong with this story? by Shendude - 1/15/2013 11:48 AM

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Yang Xiao Long - 5/25/2017 2:32 PM
Sorry for the delay. Had internet problems. Will have Pink Lantern and Devilish Women chapters up tonight
gothamalleyviper - 5/25/2017 9:40 AM
Will try to post a Love Slave, a Nazi Book and the first installment of Rubber Queen Reboot today.
gothamalleyviper - 5/25/2017 9:40 AM
Will try to post a Love Slave, a Nazi Book and the first installment of Rubber Queen Reboot today.
gothamalleyviper - 5/25/2017 9:40 AM
Will try to post a Love Slave, a Nazi Book and the first installment of Rubber Queen Reboot today.
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I'll have a chapter of Pink Lanterns up around noon, and a Devilish Women chapter a bit later.
extreme1 - 5/24/2017 9:50 PM
Started a thread for the Corruptor on the message board any feedback or ideas (including telling me to stop writing) would be appreciated.
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