So, what is wrong with this story?

by Shendude - 1/2/2013 2:59 PM

So, last month I started a story, "The Fantastic Four's New Mission". My initial chapter got a five rating and was extended later that day.

About a week later, I extended the extension. This chapter got a one rating and hasn't been expanded.

I'm tyring to figure out what I did wrong. As I see it there are several possibilities:

-I briefly had an M/M scene, which may have turned some people off.

-I had Franklin getting a blowjob from Val, which probably turned some people off.

-I waited too long.

-My writing isn't very good.

-The base concept is unpopular.

Would you folks mind helping me find out A: what I did wrong, and B: how I can revive the story?

-RE: So, what is wrong with this story? by C.King - 1/8/2013 10:58 AM
--RE: So, what is wrong with this story? by Evva - 1/13/2013 8:18 AM
---RE: So, what is wrong with this story? by Shendude - 1/15/2013 11:48 AM

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JimmyKasche - 8/19/2018 8:01 PM
Hey Anzaleth is back... and decided which universe for Bimburg... DC it is then :P
ESchorcho - 8/19/2018 8:22 AM
Jimmy, the Bimburg story looks like a lot of fun. I'll try to add to it when I can but I can't wait to see where it goes!
zahnskye - 8/19/2018 4:03 AM
Sorry I haven't been around much either. Been dedicating all my free-time to writing my novels.
colleem - 8/19/2018 3:44 AM
i canĀ“t wait to see the finish in my old story Mastermind :) Great Work Solar :) I see something big is coming
JimmyKasche - 8/18/2018 11:42 PM
anyone want to help my Bimburg story... go ahead I've been debating between DC or Marvel... I mean the obvious then would be DC/Marvel mix... but that seems kinda cheating <_<
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Had my hands full too, been busy with work.
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* too busy to write.
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I've been good but too bust to write. Hopefully that changes soon.
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Got quiet here. How's everyone doing?
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@Lakemanjon03 You made some wonderful chapters and left very good ideas for future



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