So, what is wrong with this story?

by Shendude - 1/2/2013 2:59 PM

So, last month I started a story, "The Fantastic Four's New Mission". My initial chapter got a five rating and was extended later that day.

About a week later, I extended the extension. This chapter got a one rating and hasn't been expanded.

I'm tyring to figure out what I did wrong. As I see it there are several possibilities:

-I briefly had an M/M scene, which may have turned some people off.

-I had Franklin getting a blowjob from Val, which probably turned some people off.

-I waited too long.

-My writing isn't very good.

-The base concept is unpopular.

Would you folks mind helping me find out A: what I did wrong, and B: how I can revive the story?

-RE: So, what is wrong with this story? by C.King - 1/8/2013 10:58 AM
--RE: So, what is wrong with this story? by Evva - 1/13/2013 8:18 AM
---RE: So, what is wrong with this story? by Shendude - 1/15/2013 11:48 AM

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Danknoodle420 - 7/25/2017 11:24 PM
I got a feeling that I had burned myself out. I literally wrote a story and gave up after that. ??
Evva - 7/25/2017 8:02 AM
Danknoodle420 - try readcomiconline.to It works for every browser, but mini browsers
gothamalleyviper - 7/24/2017 4:23 PM
WW Van Bar is from a story with nothing to do with Werewolves, he is a character for a modern pirate story. I just wanted the worst name possible to make the guy jaded an a fighter.
ESchorcho - 7/24/2017 3:42 PM
GAV, what would that be about? Besides werewolves I guess.
gothamalleyviper - 7/24/2017 1:46 PM
Just wanted to run a quick Idea up the flagpole, Horrible Character Name: Werewolf Wrathbone Van-Bar
Danknoodle420 - 7/23/2017 10:50 PM
Do you guys know a website for Marvel comic? There isn't any comic store nearby and I'm too lazy to go out.
industriousedge - 7/23/2017 9:56 PM
ESchorcho, are you free any time this week?
Gorel - 7/23/2017 9:46 PM
Let me know of any feedback for the She-Hulk story. If anyone has ideas or wants to add.
Gorel - 7/21/2017 5:29 PM
Got some questions about a story idea on the message board if anyone is curious. Never tried a Witchblade story, thought it might be interesting.
Cal512 - 7/21/2017 8:56 AM
*risk of litigation with DA



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