Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by ESchorcho - 11/18/2013 1:38 PM

I could use some help with a name for the Marvel Bimbotech storyline.  Right now the Black Widow is in a body-modification tank and a bimbofied Emma Frost is messing with her mind.  Here is the latest chapter:

http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=21531

I am looking to brainstorm a bimbofied name for Natasha Romanoff.

An example would be Lana Lang being converted into Lusty Love from the old Bimbotech in Smallville storyline.  Does anyone have any ideas?
<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_Widow_%28Natalia_Romanova%29" title="Black Widow (Natalia Romanova)"></a>


RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by LesLes - 11/18/2013 2:24 PM

How about the obvious "Merry Widow"? It's a type of lingerie after all, and would probably describe both her new costume and outlook on life 


RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by LesLes - 11/18/2013 4:58 PM

Another option might be to change Romanov to Onatoppov (on-a-top-of) similar to the James Bond villainess  <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v="OI3-YslbFi4"">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OI3-YslbFi4</a>

Hell, a split personality or code phrase and she could be both the submissive Merry Widow and the dominatrix Natalia Onatoppov.

 


RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by ESchorcho - 11/19/2013 7:55 PM

I do like Onatopppov for a last name.  I'll have to think it over.  Now that we're brainstorming what about Maria Hill?


RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by LesLes - 11/20/2013 1:30 AM

What is it they say about brainstorming? You have to consider every idea no matter how stupid? Here's a lot of stupid then!

Let's start with Maria Hill's first name. All I can get that sounds even a little like 'Maria' is Marrier. Which isn't much good unless she's in a bizarre wedding and aftermath roleplay scenario with the "Merry Widow". Moving on. One letter substitution gives us 'Moria'. I can't help feeling that there's a joke in "delved too deep and too greedily" but I doubt Bimbotech are going to transform her into a sexy Tolkien nerd. Or a dwarf!

'Hill' looks like it ought to be better but just rhyming it I get nothing. But for synonyms there's "mounds". If Bimbotech goes all out on her tits they could produce 'Maria Mounds'.

Finally there's her job. She's always Director or Deputy Director of SHIELD. How about if she's an Agent of SLUT instead?

Best I've managed is thus: Maria Mounds, Director of S.L.U.T.


RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by ESchorcho - 11/30/2013 10:54 AM

Very much off-topic, but I loved your work on the Miss Frost chapter, LessLess.  I am going to try to get a Bimbotech chapter out this week so definitely look for that.  Keep up the good work writing!


RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by LesLes - 12/7/2013 3:38 PM

If you like it put a ring rating on it ;) And thanks for the kind words!

Looking forward to the next chapter of Bimbotech and finding out which, if any, of my crazy ideas made the cut.

Bringing this sort-of back on topic, how much should I be avoiding Ororobot?!


RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by ESchorcho - 12/13/2013 9:09 AM

LesLes (and everyone else), I'd like to know what you think of the new Bimbotech chapters.  I decided to go in another direction with the Black Widow's bimbofied name, but I don't think that I could have gotten to it without your help so thank you for that.

I encourage you to add to the storyline if you want, and if not, I look forward to more Miss Frost chapters or anything else you might write.

I am leaning toward going with your suggestion for Maria Hill's bimbo name.


RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by colleem - 12/14/2013 10:08 AM

Mhm I like the storyline. It is a very interesting line and the changes are very logical. The heroes fight it but it is not a fair fight. 


Always like a story that's more than just... Obey me funk me worship me. Should be a logic way to get there, but what I don't understand is this.

How could an group like shield miss the fact that the Queen and her three clones were missing?  What is about xavier which I think is a greater telepath than her? 

Maybe it would be cool to see a fight between xavier and mindfuck 


RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by ESchorcho - 12/16/2013 4:24 PM

A number of SHIELD agents have been captured in this storyline so I would definitely think SHIELD will get involved at some point.  And yeah, Wilder's awesome chapter (http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=4521) touched on a bunch of other mutant females that have been given the Bimbotech chapter so that also needs to be dealt with.  Maybe a flashback?

I don't think that the bimbofied Emma Frost could stand up to Xavier, but who knows how an author could write it.  It could work.  Do you have any ideas?


RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel

by colleem - 12/16/2013 10:35 PM

As you said it. The normal Emma would maybe have been strong enough to take home on and even then it would be a good fight for her.  (xavier fan ;-) )  but in this new version a direct battle would be the end of her. But also I think that the Corp would try to get xavier under because of his power and cebrebro. 


Maybe I would try it an this way. 

Option 1
They create a second persona in Emma that act like the old Emma and tries to fool xavier and to gain his trust so mindful can screw up his dreams. 

Option 2
A combination of the chuckos and email but even then I would guess on him. 

Option 3
Mindfuck ties to get him on a more subtle way. She could infiltrate the mind of everyone around him and so she is able to use the others as a kind of transmitter, which he he surrounded all the time. Like the the subliminal message I used in masterplan 

-RE: Need Help on Bimbotech Marvel by colleem - 12/16/2013 11:34 PM

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I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
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CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
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gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
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colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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