by No one important - 9/21/2013 10:41 PM
This message is aimed at Master Kind.
I have an outline for a part but I need a bit of clarification of some things: Is there a difference between failure of the three hour window and complete failure of the challenge? ie. Masturbation with fingers or toys and oral sex, giving or receiving,
fails the three hour block but full penetrative sex with a guy makes her go full bimbo. But more importantly, is 'failure' triggered by an orgasm?
Now hopefully my brain doesn't shut down as I try to write the mundane parts of this chapter.
by Master_Kind - 9/26/2013 2:17 AM
Sorry, I should have clarified that. Failure of 3 hour window can be caused by either having an orgasm or completing any sexual act, thereby causing the bimbo quality of that 3 hour window to become permanent. Failure of the challenge can only be caused
by having full on penetrative sex with a guy (or girl), making her go full bimbo.
by No one important - 9/26/2013 5:01 AM
Okay that fits perfectly with what I was thinking. I'll try to get something posted soon but a word of warning, I'm going to take a different path then what you started just now.
I want to start on a season 3 Buffy starting with the fingernails and how she deals with someone else in Sunnydale under the challenge.
Also just for future planning, which did you foresee as the 8 parts in the 24 hours? I've got, not necessarily in order:
Unless you're combining the hair and the brains into one, I'm not sure which is missing.
by controlfan - 9/26/2013 3:12 PM
sex drive: Meaning like how much you want to have sex.
sexuality: straight or lesbian with some sort of standards to "you're cute, wanna fuck?"
by Master_Kind - 9/27/2013 1:10 AM
By all means, feel free to relaunch the Buffy one. I was just putting ideas out there.
As for the 8 categories, I'm fond of the following:
Hands/nails/Skin - erotically sensitive skin that's a perfect golden brown along with hands that have minds of their own.
Sex Drive - increased tenfold with sudden preferences for either gender
Lips/voice - pouty, over sensitive, increased urge to use them to suck on things, along with a breathy bimbo voice
Breasts - huge, perky and orgasmic pleasure pillows
Clothing - anything they wear becomes slutty, pink and skimpy
Butt/high heels - A jiggly, sensitive butt combined with sky-high heels that can't be removed
I.Q./hair - thought it'd be fun to combine the two for 3 hours of being a "dumb blonde"
Submissiveness - a sudden urge to defer to the opinion of any men nearby and please them, an inability to think on their own two feet
These can be arranged in any order but I sort of like the idea of alternating the physical changes with the mental ones. Thoughts?
by No one important - 9/27/2013 5:44 AM
I just posted my part and since I crave attention, let me know what you think.
Anyway, looking at your listing I would suggest some minor changes. The 'Submissiveness' category seem redundant. If the girl is dumb as a post and so horny she'll hump that post, I don't think you'll need them to be submissive too. I'm sure we can be
a bit more creative in making them eager to please then by just making it so. Beside the other person in Sunnydale I want to have in this isn't really the submissive type. And I'm sure I just spoiled my plans there so moving on.
The only other changes I'd make to your list is to make Skin it's own category and to shift the high heels up to clothes. That keeps it at 8 and leaves the primary/secondary effects as:
1. Nails/Hands want to please
2. Lips/Oral fixation with 'cum is tasty'
3. Boobs/Needs no secondary
4. Butt/Needs no secondary
5. Clothes/Needs no secondary beyond 'easy access'
6. Skin gets tanned/Becomes hyper sensitive and easily aroused
7. Hair/Dumb blonde
8. Sex drive/Doesn't care who or what (Buffyverse don't forget) she screws
Any objections? Also beyond the nails being first, which makes sense since that's what the parchment touched first, should what each girl go thru be randomized order?
by Master_Kind - 9/28/2013 2:27 AM
No objections whatsoever. Would you mind if I joined in on the Buffyverse (well done by the way!) by adding Willow into the mix?
Some last minute nitpicks.
2. Lip/oral fixation/"bimbo" voice - be it breathy, squeaky or sultry, I feel like this challenge should come with a voice that screams bimbo as well (possibly also forcing them to add words like "um", "totally" and "like" to their sentences).
5. Clothes/high heels - easy access is dead-on but I feel like ridiculous impractical heels should definitely be a part of that.
Other than that, I like your 8 challenges. I'd say randomizing past the first part with the hands would be fun but it might get confusing. Anyone else feel strongly one way or the other?
by No one important - 9/28/2013 11:05 AM
Too avoid having too many people in the challenge, it might be better to get Willow in on the fun in a different way. If you want, wait for Buffy to tell/convince Willow what's going on and have Willow use magic (which she is still new at in season 3) for
whatever the situation requires. ie. Learn about the magic, try to undo or induce a change, something more interesting that you might think of.
As a result, whatever being that is 'running' the challenge see this as interfering and decides to teach her a lesson.
Anyway it might be a few days before I can post another part. I've got the next one plotted but I'm in the awkward part of my week where I don't have enough time to sit down and type it out.
by No one important - 10/22/2013 5:23 AM
Sorry for the delay on this part. <SPAN lang="EN">Procrastination is a hell of a drug and near impossible to quit.
<SPAN lang="EN">Anyway, I can`t write the next part because I simply can`t decide which part of the challenge is best to have them deal with next.
<SPAN lang="EN">Also to further build on my previous idea about Willow: If you still want to include her but don`t want to have her in the challenge directly, you can have her witness the girls` bodies change for the next part of the challenge and investigate
things. This would work because those changes wouldn`t get written into her memory unless the girls lose. ie Giles and Harmony mentioning Cordy`s nails. Then once Willow snoops into the challenge, by magic of course, she `meets` the being or force behind
it which is none to please in her meddling. It then forces her into a reverse or counter Bimbo Challenge where if she doesn`t witness Buffy or Cordelia failing the three hour block, she gets stuck with a change herself.
<SPAN lang="EN">That way it brings Willow into the fun and forces her into an antagonist role out of self preservation. Also it means she could play with herself and screw anyone she wants without repercussion if we needed more sex in the story.
<SPAN lang="EN">Any thoughtsÉ
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