by C.King - 9/12/2012 9:09 AM
This is loosely based on the Missing Person's episodes on the Anime Addventure which had anime characters opening pods with hot women in them who become the willing sex slave of whoever opened their pods. They threw all sorts of fiction in them, from
anime to television to comics and more.... The heroes who opened them where mostly anime characters but a few other characters like comic book heroes also had some follow them.
I tried to leave it open to which sex were abducted or even if both sexes were taken but in my mind it was sex women by a sexist male society for sex slaves kinda like the original.
One aspect is like in Random Romance you can have any woman fall for any man, but you also have the reluctant master aspect. (Also inspired by a hypno-pic on the hypno picture collective where Spider-man saves MJ and Black Cat from aliens or something but
they get a mind parasite which permanently make the Peter's slave, as a reluctant master).
So thoughts? Feelings? Comments?
by No one important - 9/13/2012 12:14 PM
It has the possibility of being an interesting storyline but the set up you posted feels too generic.
Maybe give it a rewrite where you give some descriptions of the Gorminati themselves, ie: humans, lizards, amorphous blobs. Also consider giving an example of how someone's mind goes thru the enslavement. An example of how that conversion could end would
be that they know that they have a master and want to serve that master but in their mind's eye it's just a shadowy figure just out of sight. Thus giving reason for the 'slave at first sight' set up you're using.
If done properly, you wouldn't even have to give specifics on who that person is and let you keep the multi-universe branching options you have on the first page.
by C.King - 9/13/2012 1:55 PM
Updated and added more story. Does it help?
by Evva - 9/14/2012 10:14 AM
Another sex-slave story, being sincere, this genre is almost as overused as corruption by a device and the invencible super Dominating type
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I've made that same mistake, exidor. You're not alone.
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