Title

Their destination

by venkman
Storyline Fausta's revenge....
Characters Wonder Woman
Category Mind Control Corruption
Previous Chapter Meanwhile back in Berlin.....

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Dina Prinz extinguished her cigarette. She had spent the past few hours reviewing the files she had submitted on The IADC and U.S so called 'super heroes'. 

She removed her glasses and massaged her temples, she was relieved to be back at work, and all her reports seemed accurate but there was something niggling her, something she couldn't quite put her finger on......

There was a knock on her door.  Her dear friend Commander Fausta Grables entered the office. "Well Dina, you didn't join the SS to sit behind a desk did you? Our presence is requested at the docks for an emergency briefing."

"Of course Colonel. Let's go." Dina grabbed her coat and hat and headed for her car with Fausta.

The Docks....

As Dina and Fausta made their way to the harbour masters office, Fausta turned to Dina and smiled "I have a feeling, this could be a pivotal day in the great battle Dina" 

"I certainly hope so Fausta. Tell me again about this Doctor? He's defected and has a great source of power in his belonging? I find it strange that just you and I are to take him in if that is the case."

"My people have been in contact with the Doctor for weeks now my friend. I have no reason to believe he isn't genuine"

A huge mountain of a man stepped in front of them outside the office. "You must be Hans" smiled Dina " I believe we are expected?"

The man glanced at Fausta and gestured up the stairs to the office. The women made their way up the stairs and knocked the door.

"Who is it?" came nervously from behind the door. Fausta stooped Dina from answering and said "It's Colonel Fausta Grables and Commander Dina Prinz of the Schutztaffel. I believe you are expecting us?"

The door opened and they were hustled into the room by the strange little man. 

"I'm glad you were able to make it ladies now please, have a seat. The film I am about to show you has only ever being seen by myself and is of grave importance to the war effort." He gestured to two chairs and proceeded to pull the blinds. 

"This better not be a waste of our time" sneered Dina as the Doctor prepared the projector.

"No no Commander Prinz, I assure you, you will find this most illuminating"


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JimmyKasche - 7/21/2017 2:39 AM
I've been a bit busy in real life... which is why my chapters kinda stalled... when I finally got time to write... I got sick and my brain doesn't wanna focus :P
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:56 PM
Actually let me know if there's another story you want me to add or continue... Got so many ;)
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:54 PM
Well I'll try to post She-Hulk; Going Native some time this weekend. Unless anyone else would like to.
colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
Danknoodle420 - 7/18/2017 10:52 PM
Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
extreme1 - 7/17/2017 11:50 AM
The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.



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