Title

He keeps on punshing the little brat

by loreilei7
Storyline The Manipulator
Characters
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Previous Chapter Peter is changed from MJ's husband to her slutty roommate.

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Franklin grabbed the pretty girl by one of her pigtails and pulled hard. Peter responded with a shriek of girlish pain. 

"silly little girl. we're going to have to punish you."
He pulled her to the floor so her legs splayed widely out of the napkin sized mini-skirt that barely concealed anything. Her lacey white panties were perfectly in view as he began slapping the round cheeks beneath.
"OH! Oww! You're mean!" said Peter the bratty phrase popping out of her mouth of it's own accord. Tears began welling up out of her brown eyes.
Crystal ogled the perfect round ass of the former spider man.
"I want a piece of that."


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Cal512 - 7/21/2017 8:56 AM
*risk of litigation with DA
Cal512 - 7/21/2017 8:55 AM
My problem was litigation by DeviantArt and now I'm lacking motivation.
JimmyKasche - 7/21/2017 2:39 AM
I've been a bit busy in real life... which is why my chapters kinda stalled... when I finally got time to write... I got sick and my brain doesn't wanna focus :P
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:56 PM
Actually let me know if there's another story you want me to add or continue... Got so many ;)
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:54 PM
Well I'll try to post She-Hulk; Going Native some time this weekend. Unless anyone else would like to.
colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.



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