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"What the fuck!" Veronica snarled as the flash went off. "You getting a picture to wank off to, you fucking dyke?"
Cheryl stared at the new Veronica Lodge. Gone was the stylishly spoiled rich daddy girl. Her formely elegant raven locks was now mainly shaved, with the except of the large black mohawk that thrust out from her head. Her lips, eyelids, and nails were coated
with black lipstick and silver rings and studs adorned numerous parts of her face, including ears, lips, nose, and tongue. She wore a tight black tanktop, black leather shorts, fishnet stockings and gloves, black high-heeled boots, and all sorts of silver
spiked jewellery, including a spiked collar, spiked gauntlets, and a spiked belt.
There were many things the goth-punk "Raunchy Ronnie" liked to do: taking drugs, attending loud consorts, fucking both boys and girls, and pissing off her lame dad, teachers, and other authority figures.
"Hey, Cheryl, you wanna fuck, bitch?" Ronnie asked as she took a puff of her cigarette. "Or you too wimpy to ride Raunchy Ronnie?"
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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