Title

Franklin and Crystal visit MJ, Peter is home

by Megumi
Storyline The Manipulator
Characters Spider-Man Fantastic Four Crystal
Category
Previous Chapter Crystal mentions Mary Jane to Franklin

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Knock-Knock


Who could that be.  Peter walked up to the door and looked through the glass portal.  It was Franklin and Crystal.  Why are they here?  His parents know he's Spider-man; if they're in trouble would they have sent Frankie here?

He opened the door.

"Hello.  We're here to see Mary Jane."

Peter didn't expect that.  "You are?... What is this regarding?"

"That's personal."

"Yeah right.  Tell me, what sort of personal business would a kid have with a supermodel?"

"Kid!  I'm almost twenty."

"Uh-huh.  Anyway MJ is sleeping.  You should've called first."

"It's two in the afternoon."

"She had a late night gig.  Some photographer wanted stars in the background."

Peter sighed.  Was Franklin usually this much of a brat?  He never acted this way when Peter was in his read and blues.  There was also the buzz of his spider-sense.  He thought maybe Franklin was bringing trouble with him but no that wasn't quite right.

"Look, I came to see MJ and I am going to see MJ."


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ESchorcho - 10/1/2014 6:32 AM
MacroLass, Master_Kind - check out the message board.
colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.



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