Franklin and Crystal visit MJ, Peter is home

by Megumi
Storyline The Manipulator
Characters Spider-Man Fantastic Four Crystal
Previous Chapter Crystal mentions Mary Jane to Franklin

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Who could that be.  Peter walked up to the door and looked through the glass portal.  It was Franklin and Crystal.  Why are they here?  His parents know he's Spider-man; if they're in trouble would they have sent Frankie here?

He opened the door.

"Hello.  We're here to see Mary Jane."

Peter didn't expect that.  "You are?... What is this regarding?"

"That's personal."

"Yeah right.  Tell me, what sort of personal business would a kid have with a supermodel?"

"Kid!  I'm almost twenty."

"Uh-huh.  Anyway MJ is sleeping.  You should've called first."

"It's two in the afternoon."

"She had a late night gig.  Some photographer wanted stars in the background."

Peter sighed.  Was Franklin usually this much of a brat?  He never acted this way when Peter was in his read and blues.  There was also the buzz of his spider-sense.  He thought maybe Franklin was bringing trouble with him but no that wasn't quite right.

"Look, I came to see MJ and I am going to see MJ."

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
zarir_77 - 11/19/2015 5:35 AM

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