Title

The chair rewrites her entire mind....

by venkman
Storyline Riddlers new Partner
Characters
Category DC Mind Control
Previous Chapter Riddler is waiting for Batgirl...

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The screens and earbuds burst to life. The heroine was frozen in place, unable to tear her eyes away from the screens. A faint voice began to speak through the earbuds, she didn't know the voice or did she...... she trusted the voice, above her the screens danced in colour and light, transmitting subliminal signals directly into her mind.


Hours or maybe minutes later it was so hard to know any more, the voice and the colours stopped abruptly. Barbara was still frozen, and then pain. Incredible bursts of pain all over her body. The screens again flickered to life, filled with images of happy families, nine to five lives, good deeds, people playing by the rules. Her head was filled with voices screaming rules and commands. The intensity of the images increased as did the rate they came. The pain cursed through her body and Barbara couldn't even scream.


Suddenly the pain began to feel pleasurable, a dance in white light filled the screens in front of her as the voices started whispering and giggling in her ears. The lights stopped and the monitors came back to life. Scenes of violence, sex and money, power danced in front of her eyes, each image and piece of film crammed with more subliminal signals. The pleasure increased as did the intensity of the images.


And then the pain came again......and the pleasure.....Barbara had lost count of how many times she had cycled through them. Some of the images and voices were now seared into her psyche, like the images of Robin killing her mother, the voices were sometimes now her own........and then in a dazzling light show and an explosion of white noise in the earbuds she finally slipped into unconsciousness...


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extreme1 - 12/2/2016 6:05 PM
I start a new story and the site goes down...coincidence or the universe giving it's opinion on the story???
gothamalleyviper - 12/2/2016 5:04 PM
We shall see.
colleem - 12/2/2016 1:58 PM
wuhuuuu working again... i bet.... it will be 8 days until the next crash
gothamalleyviper - 11/26/2016 10:08 AM
For world's end Harem, who should be the first to get pregnant?
exidor455 - 11/26/2016 5:45 AM
CorruptionCentral - No problem. Sorry for being snippy! :)
extreme1 - 11/26/2016 12:10 AM
gothamalleyviper, thanks (well really thanks to colleem who suggested that I not reveal every buyer at once). There's a thread on the message board if anyone wants to talk about any ideas or has any feedback.
gothamalleyviper - 11/25/2016 10:53 PM
Interesting start on X-Men Extreme1
CorruptionCentral - 11/25/2016 3:40 PM
Exidor: Didn't think you were having ago. Thought you were feeling unappreciated on CHYOA & thought I would say I'll be adding there but it will take a while.
extreme1 - 11/24/2016 12:57 PM
I gotta agree with exidor, but then again I'm biased because I have two stories and neither have had anything submitted for them. Whereas Gambit the Pimp has had multiple people work on it (something I'm very thankful for).
exidor455 - 11/24/2016 11:56 AM
Not having ago at you CorruptionCentral. I just get the impression that people at CHYOA read stories that the authors put multiple branches into, unlike here where it's more collaborative. I refer to bounce stories back and forth.



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