Title

The chair rewrites her entire mind....

by venkman
Storyline Riddlers new Partner
Characters
Category DC Mind Control
Previous Chapter Riddler is waiting for Batgirl...

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The screens and earbuds burst to life. The heroine was frozen in place, unable to tear her eyes away from the screens. A faint voice began to speak through the earbuds, she didn't know the voice or did she...... she trusted the voice, above her the screens danced in colour and light, transmitting subliminal signals directly into her mind.


Hours or maybe minutes later it was so hard to know any more, the voice and the colours stopped abruptly. Barbara was still frozen, and then pain. Incredible bursts of pain all over her body. The screens again flickered to life, filled with images of happy families, nine to five lives, good deeds, people playing by the rules. Her head was filled with voices screaming rules and commands. The intensity of the images increased as did the rate they came. The pain cursed through her body and Barbara couldn't even scream.


Suddenly the pain began to feel pleasurable, a dance in white light filled the screens in front of her as the voices started whispering and giggling in her ears. The lights stopped and the monitors came back to life. Scenes of violence, sex and money, power danced in front of her eyes, each image and piece of film crammed with more subliminal signals. The pleasure increased as did the intensity of the images.


And then the pain came again......and the pleasure.....Barbara had lost count of how many times she had cycled through them. Some of the images and voices were now seared into her psyche, like the images of Robin killing her mother, the voices were sometimes now her own........and then in a dazzling light show and an explosion of white noise in the earbuds she finally slipped into unconsciousness...


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Gorel - 8/23/2017 4:17 PM
Hey sidewinder89, got some questions in the message board for ya.
gothamalleyviper - 8/23/2017 12:44 PM
Posted some more crank on the message boards, interested if anyone has feed back or edit suggestions.
gothamalleyviper - 8/20/2017 9:54 PM
So had a thought, What if Robin 2 (Jason Todd) was Jennifer Todd but was still a Robin and not a Batgirl?
Gorel - 8/20/2017 2:49 PM
Stumbo, if you want to add to Going Native you are more than welcome. :)
ESchorcho - 8/19/2017 10:56 AM
GAV, I loved your chapters. The storyline has a lot of potential. As for ruleradvent's addition, I'm confused. Don't get me wrong, it was well written but it doesn't seem to flow from the other chapters. Am I missing something?
gothamalleyviper - 8/18/2017 1:52 PM
Any feed back is welcome.
Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)



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