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...about herself, BEA approved Version.

by C.King
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Category Television Ring of Truth
Previous Chapter ... like turning John Crichton into hers.

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Grayza decided to stack the deck by modifying herself and her situation so she could have the advantage in any encounter with Crichton or anyone else, as well as correct any aspects of herself she didn't like. Deciding it was time to test out the aspect of the ring by writing out a new truth. So she went to her computer and access the private logs before she began to write out the new existance she had decided on.

Mele-on Grayza did not get a Heppel Oil Gland, but a rare unique gland which implanted in her. It altered her breasts so they would lactate as she wished. It also altered the milk so it had the same effect as Heppel Oil Gland, but it works on both males and females. It also makes the person who drinks the milk suggestable, with suggestions outlasting the duration of the milk's power. The gland also lengthened the life and youth of Mele-on so she looks young and beautiful into her old age... which could be five hundred years at least.

Mele-on instantly knows any changes in the reality/truth as well as the past version. There is no negative effects on her mind. She also as complete knowledge of Earth and it's culture, science and all other data. Including the same knowledge as John Crichton.


As she finished, she could feel herself change... including her breasts enlarging. She remembered the side effects of the new gland which had been created by a scientist in her debt, large breasts. However, this still only helped to increase her power by distracting men with her 42 EE Breasts. It also made it easier to deliver her milk, by using the fetish for large breasts most men seemed to have. Which was why she was so high in power, only within shooting range of holding supreme command of the Peacekeepers. Having a 'larger' set of weapons... she had to hunt and/or bait her prey.


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gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 10:05 PM
ES, look for a doctor in the fish
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 10:00 PM
GAV, I loved the chapter. I did like the Diana/Lois interaction. Still can't believe I did that. What is going to happen in the ceremony? Want to continue this in the message board?
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:34 PM
I am wondering if the same people are posting twisted Disney Princess stories here http://www.pinterest.com/pin/552746554236351206/
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:31 PM
@ ES, I did incorporate it, I hope you like where I took the rest of the cast throw the morning.
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 9:16 PM
gothamalleyviper, I messed up on my Lois Human Sacrifice chapter in Rubber Queen. It should have come after your Human Sacrifice chapter. Can't believe I did that.
colleem - 12/18/2014 11:25 AM
Susan´s dream is online. I will try to write Tony´s dream until Saturday. If someone want to write with CC and me in this Story just tell it :) We are talking about Email for better planing
gothamalleyviper - 12/17/2014 8:42 PM
I am about half way throw the chapter for Rubberqueen, and plotted out the "Wedding Chapter", but I keep getting interupted by my life AFK. I kind of want the Warhamer can from 63 Joker and go play "Whack-a-Joe"
colleem - 12/17/2014 2:14 PM
Oprimus... dont you think that it is a bit... unfair to post empty chapters?
ESchorcho - 12/17/2014 7:34 AM
gothamalleyviper, do you need any help with Rubber Queen? Let me know. If you want to start a discussion in the Message Board I would be willing to talk.
gothamalleyviper - 12/14/2014 4:39 PM
Posted 63rd Joker, working on Rubber Queen



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