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...about herself, BEA approved Version.

by C.King
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Category Television Ring of Truth
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Grayza decided to stack the deck by modifying herself and her situation so she could have the advantage in any encounter with Crichton or anyone else, as well as correct any aspects of herself she didn't like. Deciding it was time to test out the aspect of the ring by writing out a new truth. So she went to her computer and access the private logs before she began to write out the new existance she had decided on.

Mele-on Grayza did not get a Heppel Oil Gland, but a rare unique gland which implanted in her. It altered her breasts so they would lactate as she wished. It also altered the milk so it had the same effect as Heppel Oil Gland, but it works on both males and females. It also makes the person who drinks the milk suggestable, with suggestions outlasting the duration of the milk's power. The gland also lengthened the life and youth of Mele-on so she looks young and beautiful into her old age... which could be five hundred years at least.

Mele-on instantly knows any changes in the reality/truth as well as the past version. There is no negative effects on her mind. She also as complete knowledge of Earth and it's culture, science and all other data. Including the same knowledge as John Crichton.


As she finished, she could feel herself change... including her breasts enlarging. She remembered the side effects of the new gland which had been created by a scientist in her debt, large breasts. However, this still only helped to increase her power by distracting men with her 42 EE Breasts. It also made it easier to deliver her milk, by using the fetish for large breasts most men seemed to have. Which was why she was so high in power, only within shooting range of holding supreme command of the Peacekeepers. Having a 'larger' set of weapons... she had to hunt and/or bait her prey.


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ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 7:21 AM
Nice work, exidor455 on the new Susan Storm's Secret Life chapter. I really enjoy this storyline. Thanks for keeping it going.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 4:25 AM
Added a new chapter to Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto thread. :)
XFAN - 7/20/2014 8:09 PM
If you head over to Hypnopics C.King there is a decent Queen Bee story.
C.King - 7/20/2014 3:58 PM
For those who don't know, Peter's Ex Amanda was played by Jeri Ryan, Kate Logan by Tia Carrere, and Doc Kelly by Paula Garc├ęs. H.G. was played by Jaime Murray.
C.King - 7/20/2014 3:35 PM
Given Young Justice Cartoon villain Queen Bee's powers, especially how it was displayed in the spin off comic's last issue... Why no one has used a Queen Bee fanfiction, especially erotic fanfiction.
rakasur - 7/20/2014 4:44 AM
I really like Superia-ority Complex, it's a very good story. I hope to see also heroine of DC like Wonder Woman and Mary Marvel. I hope also to see confrontation between Superia and Amora, Circe, Lorelei, a gender-bender Thor and other Godess. I re



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