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A new character or characters with MAP abilities...

by C.King
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Category Mind Control
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 His name was Allen Derrick Drake, and he was a mutant. One with a strange unheard of power over the minds of others. For he was Addictivo, or that was the name he had chosen to go by, for he had the ability to mentally alter the brains of others. Granting or removing all and any kind of addictions in the minds of others. Changing both the thoughts as well as the brain chemistry of those he wished and could see, with the power of his own mind.

 The slim, eighteen year old young man was a bit of a nerd through out his life. Not one which was bully. Allen eventually figured out he had used his powers subconciously to get those who would have bullied him addicted to not bullying Allen... but just Allen. The jocks gained a physical need to avoid bullying him.

 For that was Allen's power. He could give a dependency on performing an action, using a substance or thinking a certain way. Then there brains would reward of pleasure and a feeling of well being. Even if the activity managed to have no effect on their life, made their life better or had the effect of destroying their life like many addictions. They just had to do it.

 He could create such an addiction, cure it or any natural addiction (Get hook on smoking. Allen could just use his powers and smoking would have no effect on you ever again, no matter how much nicotine in it.) or transfer one natural or artificial addictions to another kind (An alcoholic suddenly becomes a shopaholic).

 Allen had slowly learned to use his power... which is why the hottest girls in the graduating class were now addicted to love... loving Allen. When Addictivo and his powers came to the attention of the...


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JimmyKasche - 7/21/2017 2:39 AM
I've been a bit busy in real life... which is why my chapters kinda stalled... when I finally got time to write... I got sick and my brain doesn't wanna focus :P
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:56 PM
Actually let me know if there's another story you want me to add or continue... Got so many ;)
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:54 PM
Well I'll try to post She-Hulk; Going Native some time this weekend. Unless anyone else would like to.
colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
Danknoodle420 - 7/18/2017 10:52 PM
Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
extreme1 - 7/17/2017 11:50 AM
The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.



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