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In the grand scheme of things, there were powerful superheroes that could take any kind of punishment and dish out justice, scheming villains with many tricks to achieve their goals... and then there were the wannabes.
To be fair, some of these villains may have been a threat at one time or another, yet over time the power and skill of the heroes happened to transcend the paltry threat the wannabes now posed. These wannabe villains never made it in the news anymore precisely
because they were so low on the totem pole of threats, even random thugs had a chance to outclass them. All things equal, these failed criminal masterminds were destined to be forgotten.
Until one fateful day, a mysterious power decided to give them one last chance.
All around the world, these villains suddenly found themselves accompanied by wives, girlfriends, daughters, even full-fledged superheroines from the superhero community. But that wasn't all. They were not merely paired up.
They were accessories.
Any powers they might have had were gone. Not only were they enslaved to their new villainous betters, they had been changed into another part of the villains' powers and arsenal, flaunted like defeated trophies and used during battle and criminal undertakings
like any other weapon.
It just so happened, one of these women was starting to find this out for herself right now.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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