Title

How did Doom corrupt Sue?

by Anzaleth
Storyline Wedding of the century
Characters Doctor Doom Fantastic Four Invisible Woman
Category Corruption M/F Marvel Mind Control
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Doom had uncovered a book of magic that included a ritual that unleashed a person's most repressed desires.

Susan Richards was the most pure and perfect heroine, wife, and mother imaginable, who selflessly sacrificed her own needs for the good of her family and the world. But deep down, there was a part of her that wanted to put her own pleasures first, who wanted to be rich and fell-fucked and have others fulfill HER every whim.

After acquiring a couple of hairs from Susan's head, Doom had performed the ritual and awoke a stirring inside Susan Richard's soul.

Why should she be a superheroine when she could be a queen instead?


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extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:28 AM
Helen-Troy Understandable, it read to me as satire. But, I also think this particular election hit on some really deep schisms so people are understandably raw right now (As a Mexican-American, it's been a fucking nightmare). Also, LBR, on this sit
colleem - 1/23/2017 4:17 AM
Aye. But somehow he is the Luck one who gets what he wants so he is the Hero. I see him only as possible funny side Char
Helen-Troy - 1/23/2017 4:05 AM
Guys I'm a little surprised by reaction to this. It's satire, with the possibility to go two ways (let's face it, I hardly made him a "hero") and as for politics, this place is hardly PC at all!
colleem - 1/23/2017 1:58 AM
Aye. Besides the fact that it was trump it was a very good chapter.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 12:04 AM
ESchorcho, agreed.
ESchorcho - 1/22/2017 11:20 PM
Politics aside, I thought Helen-Troy's chapter was extremely well written and very intriguing. Hope to read more from that talented writer!
Gorel - 1/22/2017 1:33 PM
I write pretty screwed up stuff but even I wont go there!
Dark Z - 1/22/2017 11:27 AM
Seriously. Let's not go political, because shit will get real
C.King - 1/22/2017 9:20 AM
And now a distraction episode from real world politics and religion....
gothamalleyviper - 1/22/2017 9:16 AM
Remember folks, the quickest way to a fight is to talk politics and Religion.



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