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Ariel and Gluttony

by Megumi
Storyline Disney Princess Corruption
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Previous Chapter The Corruption Begins

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Ariel was practicing her singing when flounder rushed towards her like a fish possessed.  

“Ariel! Ariel, c’mon you’ve got to try it.”

“Try what?”

“The food.  We just found the tastiest food.  It came from the surface, and there weren’t even any hooks stuck in it.”

“Is it strawberries.  I had a strawberry once and I just loved it.”

“Not strawberries,” said flounder, “Uh... think meat.”

“Meat!”  Ariel paused.  “Flounder, you know I don’t eat anything that can break into song.”

“C’mon, just a taste.  It’s already dead, no use letting it spoil.”

As they were getting close, flounder told Ariel to close her eyes.

“Why?”

“Just do it.  Please.”

She did.  The fish somehow placed a taste in her mouth.

As soon as it touched her tongue she was changed.  Endorphins fired in her brain.  The meat itself didn’t do much for her, but it was raw and bloody and the blood filled her with warmth.  The fish could have the meat, but she wanted more blood.  Every inch of her was energized.  Then something happened that never happened before.  She felt her teeth sharpen.  Ariel was the product of millions of years of mermaid evolution.  Instincts and predatory habits that she didn’t even know she had, that her kin had denied for generations, began to awaken.  

“Flounder, this is great.  This is wonderful.  Do you have more.”

“I knew you’d understand once you tried it.  We only have a little left, but with your help I’m sure we can get more.  I’ve heard legends.  You can sing to ships.  Men will be tempted, so tempted they’ll jump right into the sea.  Then we’ll grab them.”

“Flounder what are you talking about.”

“Oh yeah.  I guess you should open your eyes now.”

Ariel opened her eyes, then gasped in shock.

He had a weighted ball tied to his leg.  He was dressed in a naval uniform.  Ariel had heard of this pirates making men... what did they call it?  Walk a plank.  He was picked over to the white of his bone but there was no mistaking it.  Ariel had tasted human blood, and, like a vampire, she would never stop wanting more.


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solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
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colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)



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