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Ariel and Gluttony

by Megumi
Storyline Disney Princess Corruption
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Previous Chapter The Corruption Begins

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Ariel was practicing her singing when flounder rushed towards her like a fish possessed.  

“Ariel! Ariel, c’mon you’ve got to try it.”

“Try what?”

“The food.  We just found the tastiest food.  It came from the surface, and there weren’t even any hooks stuck in it.”

“Is it strawberries.  I had a strawberry once and I just loved it.”

“Not strawberries,” said flounder, “Uh... think meat.”

“Meat!”  Ariel paused.  “Flounder, you know I don’t eat anything that can break into song.”

“C’mon, just a taste.  It’s already dead, no use letting it spoil.”

As they were getting close, flounder told Ariel to close her eyes.

“Why?”

“Just do it.  Please.”

She did.  The fish somehow placed a taste in her mouth.

As soon as it touched her tongue she was changed.  Endorphins fired in her brain.  The meat itself didn’t do much for her, but it was raw and bloody and the blood filled her with warmth.  The fish could have the meat, but she wanted more blood.  Every inch of her was energized.  Then something happened that never happened before.  She felt her teeth sharpen.  Ariel was the product of millions of years of mermaid evolution.  Instincts and predatory habits that she didn’t even know she had, that her kin had denied for generations, began to awaken.  

“Flounder, this is great.  This is wonderful.  Do you have more.”

“I knew you’d understand once you tried it.  We only have a little left, but with your help I’m sure we can get more.  I’ve heard legends.  You can sing to ships.  Men will be tempted, so tempted they’ll jump right into the sea.  Then we’ll grab them.”

“Flounder what are you talking about.”

“Oh yeah.  I guess you should open your eyes now.”

Ariel opened her eyes, then gasped in shock.

He had a weighted ball tied to his leg.  He was dressed in a naval uniform.  Ariel had heard of this pirates making men... what did they call it?  Walk a plank.  He was picked over to the white of his bone but there was no mistaking it.  Ariel had tasted human blood, and, like a vampire, she would never stop wanting more.


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JimmyKasche - 7/21/2017 2:39 AM
I've been a bit busy in real life... which is why my chapters kinda stalled... when I finally got time to write... I got sick and my brain doesn't wanna focus :P
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:56 PM
Actually let me know if there's another story you want me to add or continue... Got so many ;)
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:54 PM
Well I'll try to post She-Hulk; Going Native some time this weekend. Unless anyone else would like to.
colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
Danknoodle420 - 7/18/2017 10:52 PM
Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
extreme1 - 7/17/2017 11:50 AM
The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.



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