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Philip J. Fry was an ordinary 20th century slacker who had been cryogenically frozen and revived in the 31st century. Which ironically he was more suited to then his century. He worked for many times great nephew, Professor Farnsworth with a sexy cyclops
mutant, a criminal-minded robot, an alien lobsterman doctor and others as well. Where he had become a delivery boy, which while lame in the 20th century was much cooler in the 31st century as you had spaceships and aliens and adventures and stuff.
Fry had a huge crush on his co-worker, Leela the mutant cyclops, which was why with his limited income, he was cruising Central Park in New New York for keep flowers he could swipe (Bender's idea). Fry then came to discover a clover patch, much like the one
in his youth.
"I remember when I was a kid and found my lucky seven leaf clover. It made me successful in everything I did from Break dancing to be sick all year for my science project... which didn't win, but I didn't have the clover that day.
Plus when my brother Yancy found it and gave it to his son, Philip J. Fry, it allowed Phil to be the first man on Mars. He also struck oil in the mansion he won in a lottery, had a band with a bunch of hits and dated supermodels.
If I can find a seven leaf clover, I could get Leela to love me, plus anything else I want!" Fry said to himself as he searched the clover patch for a clover to bring him luck!
What he found in the clover patch was...
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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