Title

A portal opens up in the world of Ben Tennyson...

by C.King
Storyline The Superstories Adventures of Ben 10
Characters Ben "Ben 10" Tennyson
Category Television
Previous Chapter Ben 10 Begins

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 Ben looked at the pinwheel aura whirlpool which was hovering just in front of the Store 22 of Mr. Smoothy. He stood with Driba and Blukic as they looked at it also. The duo of the world's stupidest geniuses had been working on the machine which Hokestar had used to make his Mr. Smoothy store exist in multiple dimensions at once.

 "You blew a hole in the universe right here at Mr. Smoothy. How could you blow a hole in the universe? Why did you blow a hole in the universe anyway?" asked Ben as he was here to secure the whirlpool in case trouble came to it or through it.

 "We were experimenting in a defense system to protect our dimension from invading dolphins. Obviously," said Driba as he continues, "We even had a device to record the connecting universe and even switch it if need be. Not sure why it's here and not in plumber's headquarters."

 "I told you the spacial displace was not hooked up right." said Blukic as he looked at his partner.

 "Did not!" replied the other Galvin.

 "Did too!"

 "Did not!"

 "Quit it you two. We have a bigger problem right now. Like the huge swirling hole in the universe. Okay it's stable. Not going to explode or implode or something?" asked Ben as he tried to figure things out.

 "It's too stable actually. It can't be close right now. Going to need special parts to get that done, I reckin." said Blukic, as he moved to the tool he pulled out of his belt.

 Ben turned to the Galvins and glared. As they waited, something started to come out of the portal.


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ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 7:21 AM
Nice work, exidor455 on the new Susan Storm's Secret Life chapter. I really enjoy this storyline. Thanks for keeping it going.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 4:25 AM
Added a new chapter to Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto thread. :)
XFAN - 7/20/2014 8:09 PM
If you head over to Hypnopics C.King there is a decent Queen Bee story.
C.King - 7/20/2014 3:58 PM
For those who don't know, Peter's Ex Amanda was played by Jeri Ryan, Kate Logan by Tia Carrere, and Doc Kelly by Paula Garc├ęs. H.G. was played by Jaime Murray.
C.King - 7/20/2014 3:35 PM
Given Young Justice Cartoon villain Queen Bee's powers, especially how it was displayed in the spin off comic's last issue... Why no one has used a Queen Bee fanfiction, especially erotic fanfiction.
rakasur - 7/20/2014 4:44 AM
I really like Superia-ority Complex, it's a very good story. I hope to see also heroine of DC like Wonder Woman and Mary Marvel. I hope also to see confrontation between Superia and Amora, Circe, Lorelei, a gender-bender Thor and other Godess. I re



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