Title

A portal opens up in the world of Ben Tennyson...

by C.King
Storyline The Superstories Adventures of Ben 10
Characters Ben "Ben 10" Tennyson
Category Television
Previous Chapter Ben 10 Begins

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 Ben looked at the pinwheel aura whirlpool which was hovering just in front of the Store 22 of Mr. Smoothy. He stood with Driba and Blukic as they looked at it also. The duo of the world's stupidest geniuses had been working on the machine which Hokestar had used to make his Mr. Smoothy store exist in multiple dimensions at once.

 "You blew a hole in the universe right here at Mr. Smoothy. How could you blow a hole in the universe? Why did you blow a hole in the universe anyway?" asked Ben as he was here to secure the whirlpool in case trouble came to it or through it.

 "We were experimenting in a defense system to protect our dimension from invading dolphins. Obviously," said Driba as he continues, "We even had a device to record the connecting universe and even switch it if need be. Not sure why it's here and not in plumber's headquarters."

 "I told you the spacial displace was not hooked up right." said Blukic as he looked at his partner.

 "Did not!" replied the other Galvin.

 "Did too!"

 "Did not!"

 "Quit it you two. We have a bigger problem right now. Like the huge swirling hole in the universe. Okay it's stable. Not going to explode or implode or something?" asked Ben as he tried to figure things out.

 "It's too stable actually. It can't be close right now. Going to need special parts to get that done, I reckin." said Blukic, as he moved to the tool he pulled out of his belt.

 Ben turned to the Galvins and glared. As they waited, something started to come out of the portal.


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Gorel - 4/23/2017 2:45 PM
Okee dokee. If you've got a post planned, let me know ahead of time to give you the chance the post.
CorruptionCentral - 4/23/2017 10:08 AM
Gorel: I'd love to, but it will be a while. My schedule is pretty overtaxed. I'll get to it, but please don't wait on me.
C.King - 4/23/2017 8:23 AM
Any favourites for non-Dc, Non-Marvel comics/superhero characters to go through the 24 hour challenge?
supersizeme198 - 4/22/2017 4:26 PM
Please leave feedback for LMS.
rgillespie94 - 4/22/2017 9:37 AM
Can someone give me a way to contact the admin?
JimmyKasche - 4/22/2017 9:16 AM
I think only the admin can delete those spam choices.
rgillespie94 - 4/22/2017 9:07 AM
Is there any way to delete extra chapters on adventures? A lot of them are things like "We're at University together" or "Where's he nearest cash machine" you know, things that aren't story connected at all.
Gorel - 4/21/2017 8:43 PM
Well CorruptionCentral if you'd like to add to Monster Kryptonite, go ahead.
gothamalleyviper - 4/21/2017 4:31 PM
I am opting to make Tim a Mobile Phone Gamer since mobile games are designed to drag "Normal Non-Gamers" into the universe of the game as easily as possible. Hence MAA's "Normal" to iconic character design progrations.
JimmyKasche - 4/21/2017 4:07 PM
I'm all for references to Avengers Academy... I love a lot of their designs :P



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