Title

A portal opens up in the world of Ben Tennyson...

by C.King
Storyline The Superstories Adventures of Ben 10
Characters Ben "Ben 10" Tennyson
Category Television
Previous Chapter Ben 10 Begins

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 Ben looked at the pinwheel aura whirlpool which was hovering just in front of the Store 22 of Mr. Smoothy. He stood with Driba and Blukic as they looked at it also. The duo of the world's stupidest geniuses had been working on the machine which Hokestar had used to make his Mr. Smoothy store exist in multiple dimensions at once.

 "You blew a hole in the universe right here at Mr. Smoothy. How could you blow a hole in the universe? Why did you blow a hole in the universe anyway?" asked Ben as he was here to secure the whirlpool in case trouble came to it or through it.

 "We were experimenting in a defense system to protect our dimension from invading dolphins. Obviously," said Driba as he continues, "We even had a device to record the connecting universe and even switch it if need be. Not sure why it's here and not in plumber's headquarters."

 "I told you the spacial displace was not hooked up right." said Blukic as he looked at his partner.

 "Did not!" replied the other Galvin.

 "Did too!"

 "Did not!"

 "Quit it you two. We have a bigger problem right now. Like the huge swirling hole in the universe. Okay it's stable. Not going to explode or implode or something?" asked Ben as he tried to figure things out.

 "It's too stable actually. It can't be close right now. Going to need special parts to get that done, I reckin." said Blukic, as he moved to the tool he pulled out of his belt.

 Ben turned to the Galvins and glared. As they waited, something started to come out of the portal.


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Grimmer - 7/30/2015 5:19 PM
Glad to hear it Les and I won't write another chapter until you've had time to add your next one.
LesLes - 7/30/2015 5:13 PM
Loved it! I'm writing something for Shendude first, but I've got ideas for Gotham's Sirens
Grimmer - 7/29/2015 1:13 PM
Hope you enjoyed what I wrote Les Les. Thanks again for continuing this storyline with me!
clifford.cao - 7/29/2015 11:59 AM
Wedgeyman - if you're reading this, I've sent an email to your old email address. Please respond if you've received it.
LesLes - 7/28/2015 4:53 PM
Glad you liked Atlee's recruitment! Eager to read what you write. Also, there's a thread on the Messageboard now
Grimmer - 7/27/2015 7:32 PM
Les, these are both great chapters. Think I'll continue from the Atlee direction though. Expect my next chapter in a couple days and might write two, one following the heroines, the other the villainesses.
LesLes - 7/27/2015 4:59 PM
@Grimmer, hope one of those suits!
colleem - 7/25/2015 3:46 PM
You getting better ^^ only 2 this time :)
Amiee - 7/25/2015 1:59 PM
Dammit, multiple posts again!
Amiee - 7/25/2015 1:43 PM
Hey guys, some feedback on my story would be much appreciated! See the thread in the message board :)



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