Title

Sue goes evil

by exidor455
Storyline The rebirth of Malice
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Corruption
Previous Chapter She falls into the trap

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Sue was in a daze as Psycho-Man returned them to the Microverse, all the while bombarding her weakened mind with conflicting new emotions. He had added new buttons to his control device with the specific intention of converting her into a cruel and deviant villainess whose unbridled lust for him would keep her at his side.

As well as the ‘lust’ button there were others labelled ‘perversion’and ‘cruelty’, and he was pressing each of these in succession. He cackled as Sue writhed and squirmed as the new sensations washed over her.

Within seconds, they were standing in his fortress in the Microverse. With a wrench, Sue pulled free of his grasp and raised her hands to tear him apart with her force powers. He hit the ‘lust’ button hard and smiled as he watched her hands slowly lower. “Do you REALLY want to attack me, my dear?”

She gasped and her eyelids fluttered as she fought the sensations that flowed through her. “Yes! You bastard…I....I HATE you!”

“Yes, but you hunger for me too. You cannot deny it.” He moved his thumb and pressed the ‘perversion’ button with all his might.

A faint smile appeared on Sue’s anguished features, and she curled her upper lip back revealing her perfect white teeth. She almost snarled at him. “Gnnnn, this is so wrong. I feel so dirrrrty. It's so fucking goooood.” Her hands now moved of their own volition to her heaving breasts and she began fingering her nipples which were obviously stiff and hard beneath the taut material of her uniform.

They were in an antechamber and Psycho-Man, still smiling at her evilly and holding down the ‘perversion’ button, approached a door and swung it open, revealing a large room. In the center of it was a large circular bed,with black silken sheets. All around the room were torture devices and S&M equipment of every kind, as well as racks and shelves containing bondage equipment and fetish clothing – studded leather, latex, PVC.

Sue trembled with excitement as she drank all this in, then her eyes were fixed on the bed. There was the figure of a heavily muscled young man, naked except for a leather gimp mask which fully encased his head. He was lying on his back with his wrists and ankles in manacles which were chained to posts around the bed, holding him in place. His body gleamed with oil or sweat. His massive cock stood erect.

Psycho-Man smiled as he saw the predatory look on Sue’s beautiful face, and hit the ‘lust’ button again, although he felt this was almost unnecessary now.

“Your new play-room, my dear Susan. Or should I call you Malice?”

Sue smiled wickedly and began walking with a sexy swagger towards the bed, slowly peeling off her Fantastic Four uniform as she went. 


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solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)



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