Alfred Pennyworth investigates why his little maid is taking so long to show the man in

by loreilei7
Storyline Changed World
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The sexy little maid batman had become blinked in shock. The man at the door was the Penguin but in a more dressed down fashion. Before she could say a word, a voice rang out in stern dissaproval.

"Bebe, show our guest inside and stop dawdling about." Alfred Pennyworth came forward, looking less like an elderly butler and more like a dissipated old playboy. "I beg your pardon, the girl's pretty but she hasn't a mind in her."
"quite alright, I was enjoying merely looking at her"More like leering, Batman thought as the penguin kissed her dainty hand
"Bebe,run along and fetch us some drinks." she began to walk away stumbling a bit in her unfamilarly high heels as she felt Alfred swat her hard on her round butt. The two men chortled heartily

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
zarir_77 - 11/19/2015 5:35 AM

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