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Alfred Pennyworth investigates why his little maid is taking so long to show the man in

by loreilei7
Storyline Changed World
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The sexy little maid batman had become blinked in shock. The man at the door was the Penguin but in a more dressed down fashion. Before she could say a word, a voice rang out in stern dissaproval.

"Bebe, show our guest inside and stop dawdling about." Alfred Pennyworth came forward, looking less like an elderly butler and more like a dissipated old playboy. "I beg your pardon, the girl's pretty but she hasn't a mind in her."
"quite alright, I was enjoying merely looking at her"More like leering, Batman thought as the penguin kissed her dainty hand
"Bebe,run along and fetch us some drinks." she began to walk away stumbling a bit in her unfamilarly high heels as she felt Alfred swat her hard on her round butt. The two men chortled heartily


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gothamalleyviper - 4/24/2014 8:29 PM
Kirayoshi, got to say good work, hopefully there is more life in your branch.
C.King - 4/24/2014 9:54 AM
Good Job, Kirayoshi. Good Job. I'll see if I have a story to continue it.
gothamalleyviper - 4/23/2014 7:41 PM
One short, one longer, but hope people provide feed back
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 6:50 PM
Was somebody going to pick up from Asp's new chapter? I was about to start when I noticed a new option. If someone wants to take it go ahead I will wait till tomorrow.
aspiringactor - 4/22/2014 4:12 PM
Just added a chapter for 'Return of the Black Queen' if any one wants to take a look.
Gorel - 4/22/2014 11:36 AM
No worries
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 5:08 AM
Gorel, I will have something up for the Blue Flu this evening, just had stuff to do the last few days.
venkman - 4/21/2014 1:14 AM
Thanks guys!Glad you liked it. Not sure where to take it now but would be good to see it continue, either by me or someone else :)
ESchorcho - 4/20/2014 9:49 PM
I second that on Fausta's revenge. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Loving the Valkyrie transformation.
dunloprobert - 4/20/2014 9:23 AM
venkman, just to say i have thoroughly enjoyed your fausta's revenge story, and i am glad no one else has tried to add/interfere with it. thankyou.



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