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Alfred Pennyworth investigates why his little maid is taking so long to show the man in

by loreilei7
Storyline Changed World
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The sexy little maid batman had become blinked in shock. The man at the door was the Penguin but in a more dressed down fashion. Before she could say a word, a voice rang out in stern dissaproval.

"Bebe, show our guest inside and stop dawdling about." Alfred Pennyworth came forward, looking less like an elderly butler and more like a dissipated old playboy. "I beg your pardon, the girl's pretty but she hasn't a mind in her."
"quite alright, I was enjoying merely looking at her"More like leering, Batman thought as the penguin kissed her dainty hand
"Bebe,run along and fetch us some drinks." she began to walk away stumbling a bit in her unfamilarly high heels as she felt Alfred swat her hard on her round butt. The two men chortled heartily


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ESchorcho - 8/4/2015 3:37 PM
jmony777, it looks like the 'one hour rule' in the Mannequin storyline was forgotten for a bit there.
Grimmer - 7/30/2015 5:19 PM
Glad to hear it Les and I won't write another chapter until you've had time to add your next one.
LesLes - 7/30/2015 5:13 PM
Loved it! I'm writing something for Shendude first, but I've got ideas for Gotham's Sirens
Grimmer - 7/29/2015 1:13 PM
Hope you enjoyed what I wrote Les Les. Thanks again for continuing this storyline with me!
clifford.cao - 7/29/2015 11:59 AM
Wedgeyman - if you're reading this, I've sent an email to your old email address. Please respond if you've received it.
LesLes - 7/28/2015 4:53 PM
Glad you liked Atlee's recruitment! Eager to read what you write. Also, there's a thread on the Messageboard now
Grimmer - 7/27/2015 7:32 PM
Les, these are both great chapters. Think I'll continue from the Atlee direction though. Expect my next chapter in a couple days and might write two, one following the heroines, the other the villainesses.
LesLes - 7/27/2015 4:59 PM
@Grimmer, hope one of those suits!
colleem - 7/25/2015 3:46 PM
You getting better ^^ only 2 this time :)
Amiee - 7/25/2015 1:59 PM
Dammit, multiple posts again!



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