Title

Time Traveler

by sleeve.jones
Storyline Wedding of the century
Characters Doctor Doom Invisible Woman
Category
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   Doom sat on his throne resting his head on his hand watching a crystal ball.  The alarms started ringing.  Doom bots from all over the complex rushed into the room.  Doom stood up and prepared an energy blast.  A ball of energy appeared in the center of the throne room.  Dom recognized the types of energy being displayed his sensors.  The ball of light was a time traveler.  The light melted away revealing a beautiful young woman in a green uniform reminiscent of the Fantastic Four except it had the Latvia crest where the four should have been.  The girl was probably 20 or so.

     "Hello Father."  The girl said.

      "Who are you." He said.

      "I am Valeria Von Doom, your daughter with the invisible woman."  She smiled and bowed.

      He was already preparing a scan.  The girl placed her hands at her side letting the machine scan her without resistence.

   "Satisfied father.  I'm sure the cronoton meter also prooved I am from the future." She said.

    "Why did you come here.  Is there some future you wish to prevent."  Doom said. 

    "No father."  She bowed her head, "in order for my brother's and I to exist I must make sure the future happens."

     Doom sat back in his chair.  He smiled under his helmet as he considered what she had just told him.  This girl came back in time wearing his crest and she claims to be his and Susan Storm's child.  This could not be a trick for what purpose could it serve.

     "If you are here to make sure your future happens then tell me what future could you come from."

    "Father in my future the enemy tried to take this world but the children of Doom defeated the threat and you have assumed control of the world."

     "Who is this enemy."

 

 


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Fanfic Fetishist - 7/29/2016 6:42 AM
I would absolutely love to collaborate on We Happy Few. I've put a post up on the Addventure message board.
bambucea09 - 7/29/2016 2:03 AM
Who likes to add female symbiote stuff?
colleem - 7/29/2016 1:29 AM
Do not know any game in this way but uncle Google told me about the Pleasant Story :) sounds interesting
Gorel - 7/28/2016 11:29 PM
Looks like its based on the video game of the same name. Interesting premise really.
colleem - 7/28/2016 11:28 PM
Fanfic :) could we talk about your story in the Message Board :) It sounds very interesting and is something new :) Would gladly join it but donĀ“t want to ruin your Idea :)
Fanfic Fetishist - 7/28/2016 10:52 PM
For purposes of my new story, I would like it if the Horrible Thing that the heroes and villains did never be revealed.
Fanfic Fetishist - 7/28/2016 10:42 PM
Trying an experiment with a non-H story...
Gorel - 7/28/2016 8:44 PM
Sadly its a reoccurring problem Regret.
Regret - 7/28/2016 2:55 PM
If you just think a chapter is bad use the rating buttons. There is no need to clutter up the page just to be an ass to the author.
Regret - 7/28/2016 2:54 PM
This bothers me every time I see it whether it's in one of my chapters or another contributor's. Can people please stop using the add chapter button to leave comments. If you have constructive criticism leave it on the message board, if you just think



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